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What You are to Me

What You are to Me – Five Lines
Always in lucid dreams, it’s you I see, ever like the North Star, constant and bright. My angel, you’re my heavenly delight! Your love, like truth, has set me free tonight. You’re my life and you’re most precious to me!
Envelope Quintet: Rhyme Scheme: a,b,b,b,a 10 syllables per line 06-22-2015 Contest: Five Lines/Metaphors and Simile Sponsor: Sara Kendrick Placement: 1st

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Date: 7/31/2015 7:47:00 PM
since God Is our Father, that makes you a sister to me....since you are a woman, you are my destiny....since I think your heart is true, you are my friend....and since we have all this, nothing negative can begin....;)
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/31/2015 8:30:00 PM
What a very precious expression! Even your comments you transform into beautiful poetry - all right now, Eric!:-)
Date: 7/7/2015 6:44:00 AM
Five lines that say it all. Simply Lovely.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/7/2015 7:54:00 AM
Awww! Thank you so much, Milton! Your compliments mean so much to me! Have a nice day! Pandita
Date: 7/3/2015 3:53:00 AM
Pandita you shine your romantic heart here..! COngrats!~Olive ELoisa =)
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/3/2015 2:03:00 PM
Dear Olive, thank you so very much for your sweet compliments and continued support! Have a wonderful weekend, my friend! Pandita
Date: 7/2/2015 9:15:00 PM
Nicely done (7)
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/3/2015 2:02:00 PM
Thank you so very much, JT! I am really happy you like it! Pandita
Date: 7/1/2015 4:46:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome passionate winning write Pandita!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/1/2015 9:08:00 PM
Hi Dr. Upma, thank you very much for your kind compliments which I always appreciate! Pandita
Date: 6/30/2015 10:58:00 PM
Pandita Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT**
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/1/2015 9:07:00 PM
Thank you so very much, my friend, for your continued support and encouragement! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 6/30/2015 6:16:00 PM
Enjoyable romantic quintain, Pandita. Lovely words to your soul-partner! Congratulations on a merited win. // paul
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/30/2015 8:25:00 PM
Many thanks, dear Paul for your lovely compliments as always! Have a wonderful evening. Pandita
Date: 6/30/2015 3:49:00 PM
I am delighted that you entered my contest. All the entries were uniquely written and of good quality. I read your wonderful work and found it to be superb. Detailed dreams of love.. Congrats on your win …Sara
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/30/2015 8:24:00 PM
Sara, I am so delighted as well that you honoured my work with such a high placement and lovely compliments! I enjoyed participating in your contest and it gave me a wonderful opportunity to try out a poetry form that I never tried before! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 6/29/2015 10:29:00 PM
such a sweet one. Glad to finally see it on this winners' list.Congrats, dearie.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/30/2015 8:17:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Andrea! I am really happy you like it! Pandita
Date: 6/25/2015 7:34:00 AM
Pandita, this is so beautiful and romantic.The form was great as well as well. I'm glad I stopped by to view it this fine morning:)Alexis
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/26/2015 8:47:00 AM
Dear Alexis, thank you so very much for your sweet compliments and continued support! Have a wonderful weekend, my friend! Pandita
Date: 6/23/2015 8:27:00 PM
Hi Pandita, this is so sweetly romantic and I enjoyed reading this Envelope Quintet. I have to give this form a try soon! Kika
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/23/2015 8:34:00 PM
Awww - I am glad you like it! This is my first time trying this form so thank you for the sweet compliments! Pandita