Pandita Sietesantos Poet Quintain (English)

What You Are To Me

What You are to Me – Five Lines

Always in lucid dreams, it’s you I see, 
ever like the North Star, constant and bright.
My angel, you’re my heavenly delight!
Your love, like truth, has set me free tonight.
You’re my life and you’re most precious to me!


Envelope Quintet: Rhyme Scheme: a,b,b,b,a 
10 syllables per line

06-22-2015

Contest:       Five Lines/Metaphors and Simile
Sponsor:      Sara Kendrick
Placement:    1st

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Eric Boddie July 31, 2015 at 7:47 PM since God Is our Father, that makes you a sister to me....since you are a woman, you are my destiny....since I think your heart is true, you are my friend....and since we have all this, nothing negative can begin....;) Pandita Sietesantos July 31, 2015 at 8:30 PM What a very precious expression! Even your comments you transform into beautiful poetry - all right now, Eric!:-)

Milton Robertson July 7, 2015 at 6:44 AM Five lines that say it all. Simply Lovely. Pandita Sietesantos July 7, 2015 at 7:54 AM Awww! Thank you so much, Milton! Your compliments mean so much to me! Have a nice day! Pandita

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 3, 2015 at 3:53 AM Pandita you shine your romantic heart here..! COngrats!~Olive ELoisa =) Pandita Sietesantos July 3, 2015 at 2:03 PM Dear Olive, thank you so very much for your sweet compliments and continued support! Have a wonderful weekend, my friend! Pandita

Honestly J.T. July 2, 2015 at 9:15 PM Nicely done (7) Pandita Sietesantos July 3, 2015 at 2:02 PM Thank you so very much, JT! I am really happy you like it! Pandita

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 1, 2015 at 4:46 AM Congrats on ur awesome passionate winning write Pandita! Pandita Sietesantos July 1, 2015 at 9:08 PM Hi Dr. Upma, thank you very much for your kind compliments which I always appreciate! Pandita

Skat A June 30, 2015 at 10:58 PM Pandita Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT** Pandita Sietesantos July 1, 2015 at 9:07 PM Thank you so very much, my friend, for your continued support and encouragement! Warmest regards. Pandita

Paul Callus June 30, 2015 at 6:16 PM Enjoyable romantic quintain, Pandita. Lovely words to your soul-partner! Congratulations on a merited win. // paul Pandita Sietesantos June 30, 2015 at 8:25 PM Many thanks, dear Paul for your lovely compliments as always! Have a wonderful evening. Pandita

Sara Kendrick June 30, 2015 at 3:49 PM I am delighted that you entered my contest. All the entries were uniquely written and of good quality. I read your wonderful work and found it to be superb. Detailed dreams of love.. Congrats on your win …Sara Pandita Sietesantos June 30, 2015 at 8:24 PM Sara, I am so delighted as well that you honoured my work with such a high placement and lovely compliments! I enjoyed participating in your contest and it gave me a wonderful opportunity to try out a poetry form that I never tried before! Warmest regards. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich June 29, 2015 at 10:29 PM such a sweet one. Glad to finally see it on this winners' list.Congrats, dearie. Pandita Sietesantos June 30, 2015 at 8:17 PM Thank you so very much, Andrea! I am really happy you like it! Pandita

Alexis Y. June 25, 2015 at 7:34 AM Pandita, this is so beautiful and romantic.The form was great as well as well. I'm glad I stopped by to view it this fine morning:)Alexis Pandita Sietesantos June 26, 2015 at 8:47 AM Dear Alexis, thank you so very much for your sweet compliments and continued support! Have a wonderful weekend, my friend! Pandita

Kika Ayala June 23, 2015 at 8:27 PM Hi Pandita, this is so sweetly romantic and I enjoyed reading this Envelope Quintet. I have to give this form a try soon! Kika Pandita Sietesantos June 23, 2015 at 8:34 PM Awww - I am glad you like it! This is my first time trying this form so thank you for the sweet compliments! Pandita