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What Would I Take

Oh I would take time if only to ponder on and your love to keep me strong then you I would take safe within my memory a shining light ails the gloom. © Harry J Horsman 2013

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Skat A

Date: 11/7/2013 9:56:00 AM

Harry, Cheers on your winning poem...... SKAT LOVE :) :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/6/2013 7:46:00 PM

HARRY , nicely done.... congrats in Shadow's contest.... xox~ LINDA

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/4/2013 4:59:00 PM

Great winning work..Way to go..Sara

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 11/4/2013 11:30:00 AM

wow!! time, the woman you love and a light. like it friend Harry :) congratulations on your win ;)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/4/2013 9:43:00 AM

superb in its brevity, harry..... sweet congrats on your win!..:) huggs

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/4/2013 4:10:00 AM

congratulations harry another fine write from you, I would have placed it higher xx

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/3/2013 6:32:00 PM

stopping by again to congratulate you on your win :)

Donna Jones

Date: 11/3/2013 6:11:00 PM

Congratulations Harry...it is a winner....I really love it...

Joseph May

Date: 11/3/2013 5:15:00 PM

congrats on your win Harry

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 11/3/2013 5:13:00 PM

Good choices, what is the point if their is no time, love and memories....excellent write! Big congrats! Hugs

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/3/2013 2:16:00 PM

Harry congrats on placing in my contest Shadow x smile hugs

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/2/2013 4:43:00 PM

a fair trade. nice to heart from you harry.

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/2/2013 4:31:00 PM

What could be better than this.....taking that which is most important....just as you say in this lovely sedoka! Excellent choice!!

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 11/2/2013 11:02:00 AM

In your style and depths you always amaze us by the sweet and beautiful colors of your love feelings. Just beautiful Harry. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra K Kapoor

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/2/2013 9:20:00 AM

You are a very romantic poet Harry.I am adding this beauty to my fvs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/2/2013 1:40:00 AM

It rejoices the heart and uplifts the mind! Excellent piece, Harry, Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2013 12:57:00 AM

What a glorious little poem, Harry. Glad I stopped by to see if you had a new one up.

Ralph Mason

Date: 10/31/2013 10:29:00 PM

excellent poem harry. well done. Ralph

Donna Jones

Date: 10/31/2013 8:20:00 PM

Harry what can I add to everyone else?...this is truly truly first class...thank you....

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/29/2013 9:19:00 PM

You write like a man from another romantic time Harry, and I love your poems!

Karen Anglesey

Date: 10/29/2013 8:45:00 AM

So much to absorb and fully enjoy in your creative piece of art. Lovely :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/29/2013 4:05:00 AM

you do these so well there is so much meaning in what you write harry, luv you xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/28/2013 10:37:00 AM

Ha love it Harry, is this for that one "WHAT WOULD YOU TAKE" contest... IF so your poem is mighty fine, and I love how you would rather take reality, than material things... very simple and smart....but this is part of what makes it brilliant :) love love...LINDA

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 10/27/2013 11:36:00 PM

I agree with your sentiments. A truly lovely poem. . . Always, Laura

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/27/2013 6:36:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..If this is for the contest, reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit..Sara