Michael J. Falotico Poet Free verse

What Will Be

What will be is what will be...
Always flying high above the trees..
Better then lying on a bed of deceit..
Never really landing but I still can see..
What will be is what will be...
A sinking feeling from the dreamer in me...
Too many doors that never had a key...
I'm breathing in desires from a window in me.....
And that's how life is seen through me....
Because what will be is what will be....

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Black Eyed Susan August 2, 2012 at 11:56 AM you remind me of my husband, lol. he always says "it is what it is" ;) it would be cool to know the future though, at least once in a while, unless it was visions of murder of course. but i digress... I like your line "too many doors that never had a key". not getting in can be just as changing as getting in. the loss of something we never had, the closed possbibilities, the sadness or anger...

Dinda Minardi August 1, 2012 at 10:14 AM this is a very good one, Michael. When I read it it was like a chant! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 31, 2012 at 8:09 AM reminds me of that Doris Day song Que Sera Sera.. long ago.. agnificent lines into a deep u Michael luv.. true some things we can control and change but many we just have to go with the flow luv..I truly luv this piece .. JG in exhilarated mode after reading my WK.. oh..xoxo

Deborah Burch July 30, 2012 at 7:40 AM awsome, Michael...you say it soooo much better...well done...love ya....hope all is well...deb

Russell Sivey July 29, 2012 at 4:43 PM I believe this completely and it must be true, "what will be is what will be"! And I believe the most dramatic line from this incredible write has to be, "A sinking feeling from the dreamer in me" and I believe that all of us poets are dreamers in one sense or another! I know I am...and I may be with that sinking feeling as well! You've done awesomely well my friend! Great Work!!

Cindy Cayton July 29, 2012 at 1:42 PM I can relate to this piece SO much Michael!Man, you got ESP or somethin'? and what's the deal with you men in pools anyhow? hahaha, hot summer huh? I'm in Ohio, it's been dry , unless a thunderstorm. hot. hot. hot. ~and I'll have to inquire later of what you had for Sunday Dinner. Hey, He doesn't like Pork, at all... and should've went with steak, he's picky.hahahaha

David Williams July 29, 2012 at 10:52 AM Michael cool words my friend...David

Anne-Lise Andresen July 29, 2012 at 7:07 AM Michael, I have some keys that I do not know where fit...they I will send to you....lol.. - Very good poem today my friend, like it a lot. - Have a beautiful Sunday. - oxox big hug from me to you :) / Anne-Lise