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What, Who, Dunno

My mind swirls and meanders Wishing to go to a dreamland of sorts Where imagination reigns and reality sits quietly I'm working on facts, as my fingers type my mind drifts and has to be pulled back I wish to be alone with my thoughts Despite their bullish behaviour My mind and body are disconnected I just have to hope my moments of lucidity are good ones I want to dive into a pool where all my thoughts arrive at once, visible and clear Ahh, just remembered I've tried to rescue a bee - I'm going to go and check on him* *The bee hasn't made it :(

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Hat Bueckert

Date: 5/28/2023 10:00:00 PM

If you find that pool let me know! Well written daydreamer, sad for the bee tho... I spoon fed one sugar water once, seemed to perk him up if that's helpful at all for a future troubled bumble

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/28/2023 11:11:00 PM

Thanks Hat, I'm not sure my thoughts are really ever going to get to the point haha yes, I've successfully saved at least one bee before with sugar water. This one only had one working leg when I found it, so in dramatic fashion I carried it home lay on a leaf and gave it sugar water and a selection of flowers. Better than get trodden on, but it didn't really stand much chance :(

Paul Callus

Date: 5/23/2023 6:18:00 AM

I enjoyed meandering with your random thoughts, DD. A mixture of imagination & reality helps to arrive at the desired point. ~ Regards // paul

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/23/2023 7:38:00 AM

Thanks Paul, glad you liked it. I'm now free to be with my thoughts but it's all gone quiet haha

John Lawless

Date: 5/23/2023 5:10:00 AM

When I see someone with that "peaceful" gaze....obviously in a different moment than me....I often wish they had taken me with them..

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/23/2023 5:45:00 AM

I actually do have quite a peaceful disposition and appear calm and relaxed, I'd feel sorry for anyone who ever joined me in my head though - I'm rarely found imagining the ocean :)

Paul Willason

Date: 5/23/2023 4:17:00 AM

The imagination creates worlds that are very enticing...unfortunately such can't be sustained, reality always bursts the balloon as your poor bee can attest. Good one DD

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/23/2023 5:46:00 AM

Thanks Paul, appreciate you taking the time to read my randomness today :)