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What Went Wrong

It’s too late to fix What went wrong, Too late to explain We waited too long, Now two distant strangers Who didn’t recognize the dangers, Of speechless nights And avoided fights, Now surreal dreams And silent screams Fill my mind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/3/2024 1:17:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed."
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Date: 2/12/2016 8:57:00 PM
kristen, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 10/16/2009 9:06:00 AM
This is thrilling. All the best.
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Date: 10/15/2009 4:55:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem, scarry how relatable it is
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