What We Once Knew

Our outstretched palm, once offering clarity,
The semblance of assured balm
Now only seethes to erode my calm.
Your breath that was the sounds of peace,
As nurturing as the mother’s womb, inspiring of a budding bloom,
Now stands alone, the solid echo of a hollowed tomb.
Eyes that shone the breadth of life,
With endless wonder to make me gasp,
Now quiver me with endless rasp.
For now in time we come again,
Old and grey and weathered men, the shiver of a moment stopped
To ink the life that we forgot.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 5, 2015 at 11:13 PM
Lauren, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
Mehta Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 9:08 AM
Interesting and fantastic write on the theme of jealousy, congrats on the win, Lauren
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January 3, 2015 at 2:08 AM
Congrats on your fine win Lauren... huggs
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January 2, 2015 at 11:32 PM
LAUREN, Congratulations on your win. Awesome "Green-Eyed Monster, poem." Love LINDA
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 3:21 PM
I found the imagery deep and chilling - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Walker  Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 3:03 PM
As a winner of my contest, I congratulate you! Verlena
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December 20, 2014 at 3:17 PM
LAUREN, AMAZING & DEEP,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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December 21, 2014 at 3:53 PM
Thank you ever so much for the feedback, and welcoming me here, so far people I have spoken to seem brilliant, and I will make sure I take a look at the competition and attempt to write something to celebrate this cold month and Merry Christmas to you
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December 20, 2014 at 8:10 AM
- Welcome to P - Soup !!!! .... A Christmas smile two you :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Knight Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 3:54 PM
Thank you - I hope you too have a merry christmas, and enjoy the holidays. Lauren x
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