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What Was I Thinking Contest

filled loneliness with emptiness and screamed into the void ~ silently

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Terry Flood

Date: 10/2/2023 3:14:00 PM

Excellent win, DD. Congrats.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/2/2023 9:53:00 PM

Thank you Terry - glad you liked it :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2023 8:37:00 PM

Great contrast made this a real winner

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/1/2023 10:56:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea, appreciated x

Karen Jones

Date: 9/29/2023 5:03:00 AM

Congrats on a win!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/29/2023 5:29:00 AM

Haha all winners in this game ;)

Brian Sambourne

Date: 9/27/2023 8:21:00 PM

Excellent! The Monoku reminds me of Edvard Munch's "The Scream." Congratulations on a stellar piece. Brian

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/27/2023 9:22:00 PM

Thanks Brian - I've written ekphrasis on the scream a few times - all Munch's work is fascinating. Thank you for your supportive words

Paul Bell

Date: 9/19/2023 6:45:00 AM

I was thinking it was a contest of equals. In saying that, I rarely think, but it sounded good. lol

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/19/2023 6:51:00 AM

Ahh I play around with saying nothing whilst saying everything and vice versa - so who knows what I mean, I'm always waiting for the end of a poem that tells me but the revelations never arrive

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/18/2023 6:20:00 PM

I feel your loneliness! Excellent monoku, DD. Hoping you are well:)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/18/2023 10:12:00 PM

Thanks Danny - the site is like a ghost town these days depending what street you walk down - nice to see you pop in :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/18/2023 5:41:00 PM

We all do that sometimes! Hugs

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/18/2023 10:09:00 PM

Thanks Kim :)