What Might They Find There

What might you find there
down deep in my soul
Within the darkness
of that expansive hole
Will there be substance 
Will there be diamonds or coal
Step down the stairs quickly
at the door pay your toll

If you wish to be a voyeur 
there will be plenty to see
Unclothed and oh so gorgeous
beautiful women are plenty
Yet the guilt from these carnal thoughts
makes me feel a strange empty
I long for their pleasure 
yet I yearn to be set free

Walk a bit further
see deeper to my core
You have just scratched the surface
do you really want to see more
My soul is a vast ocean
no ceiling and no floor
Liquid and expansive
molton lava shore to shore

There is plenty of love there
tremendous courage it's true
I have known my share of pain
there is much that I've been through
Roads I've traveled are many
dark alleys quite a few
I've found the way to the light
my heart is forged a steel blue

If you travel far enough
you will bathe within light
The darkness a shield
to protect this soul with might
Beyond the locked door
my soul rises like a kite
Only those who have courage
can fly to such great height!

For Frank's Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Delaney Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 7:25 PM
This one is awesome, Richard: It flows naturally and with no pretensions. I know it will place high. SuZ
Lamoureux Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 9:21 AM
Thanks SuZ.;0)
Chircop Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 4:29 PM
Your light shines bright..So your stremgth upon your weaknesses as a normal human..We are all there..But may we all be strong enough.to choose the light over the dark...Awesome you.A fave.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 9:23 AM
I wonder why the choice seems so difficult at times?? Thanks for visiting Charmaine.
Emu Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 2:22 AM
Pretty dam good Richard, really liked this poem.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 3:22 AM
Thanks Craig.
Vaso Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 9:13 PM
What a pleasure to read, this is one of my favorite reads lately! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 10:52 PM
Thanks Arthur.
Yvonne Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 10:31 AM
Daring and honest. Beautifully written. A Fav.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 8:47 PM
Thanks Armand.
Eastman Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 1:57 PM
A master piece my friend.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 8:18 AM
Thanks Carol.
Andresen Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 8:12 AM
- Really great writing, Richard - All your lines make sense, enjoy reading - In my eyes it deserves a solid 7! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 8:18 AM
Thanks and hugs back to you.;0)
Muideen Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 7:56 AM
This is a very great write. It flows like stream in my mind. Wow! I don't doubt this wins the contest. Good luck, brilliant poet...........A.M.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 8:03 AM
Thanks A.M. You are kind.
Nance Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 6:08 AM
a creative trek through you, I enjoyed the poetic adventure, hugs x
Lamoureux Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 7:38 AM
Good morning and thanks Casarah.
Kendrick Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 4:17 PM
Reads like winning material..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:24 PM
Thanks Sarah.
Hamilton Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 9:51 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest! A worthy winner!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:24 PM
Thanks John.
Wigley Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 12:43 AM
Admirable in it's honesty, Richard, if we all were to be so, what a world it could be. Fine write, good luck in the comp. Regards, Viv
Lamoureux Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:13 AM
Thanks Viv, much appreciated.
Hicks Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 11:40 PM
Being skeptical of oneself is often a sign of having a lot to offer ... as you continue to demonstrate. Thanks for transporting me into your world, Rick. Worth the time to read ... I enjoyed it very much.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:14 AM
Thanks Timothy, I hope all is well in your world.
Turner Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 3:45 PM
It is amazing to me how we all see our faults before we see the goodness and beauty that lies within. A fantastic write, Richard. Congratulations on your win:)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Thanks Daniel.
Scars Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 1:11 PM
Richard...this is proof of your gift in the light...congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Lamoureux Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 8:32 PM
Thanks Laura Loo.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Thanks Laura Loo.
Chansarkar Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 1:06 PM
All the lines shine with brilliance Richard!Thanks for sharing!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 8:32 PM
Thanks Sara.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 8:08 PM
Thanks Sara.
La France Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 8:33 PM
Richard, so many great lines, my soul is a vast ocean, wonderful ~
Lamoureux Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 9:06 PM
Thanks Constance.:0)
Bear Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 9:06 PM
Your soul is always in the light It shines in all you do. Good luck in the contest A big 7 from me. Love Mom
Lamoureux Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 10:44 PM
Thanks mom love Rick.
Manassian Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 4:05 PM
Oh, Richard. What a beautiful piece about a beautiful soul. Lovely...I loved the molten lava bit. Superb, dear. You have a beautiful soul....the exterior is pretty nice as well! ;)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 7:05 PM
Thanks Eileen, now you have me blushing. ;0)
Dalei Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 11:24 AM
Very deep write, Richard. I enjoyed the entire poem. Best wishes for the contest.............// hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 2:08 PM
Thanks Manmath.
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