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written for the monoku contest theme 1 , on what makes me feel poetry, sponsored by Malabika Ray Choudhury...

When I am wrapped with a feeling of ecstacy;

#1. 

kissed by citrine swirls of moon-rivers ... I breathe warm sparks of heart-shaped haze...

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Crystol Woods

Date: 4/13/2025 12:55:00 PM

So you! Imagery and emotion wrapped in beautiful language xo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/10/2025 1:21:00 AM

- Back with a congratulation, Ink :) - hugs

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 4/9/2025 9:20:00 PM

Brilliant as always! Thanks for sharing, IE. Congratulations on your win

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/9/2025 1:10:00 PM

IE, you definitely have a great take on what it takes! The way you describe this seems incredible and wonderful at the same time. Smiles!!

Valsa George

Date: 4/6/2025 5:54:00 AM

Wow, too profound that I swirl into dizzying depths. How well you pack a world of meaning in a single line. All the Best sweet friend.

Suzette Richards

Date: 4/5/2025 11:29:00 PM

I love the imagery in this, Ink.

Justin Bordner

Date: 4/5/2025 6:35:00 PM

Ignited by the afterglow of love's rooting aftershocks, I surge to stare remorselessly at Melancholy's heart graying goodbye...J.A.B.

Karen Jones

Date: 4/4/2025 7:04:00 PM

Wow! Simply beautiful!

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/4/2025 9:26:00 AM

Dear Ink, your verse is exquisite and enchanting. I truly appreciate it. I wish you success in the contest with this amazing Monoku! You really affected my heart and spirit. Obviously, your eloquence surpasses my own; smiles!

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 4/4/2025 6:09:00 AM

Hello IE, this is so romantically sweet. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Wishing you a wonderful weekend. Stay blessed.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/3/2025 4:14:00 PM

Breathtaking, beautiful poetry, Ink! This is a fave. Good luck in the contest.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/3/2025 3:46:00 PM

You are all heart touch and feel dear Ink, such a brilliant Monaku !

Ink Empress
Date: 4/4/2025 11:36:00 AM

Awwn dear rose! You feel me always

David Kavanagh

Date: 4/3/2025 3:43:00 PM

Hot stuff Ink! And you say it in a more beautiful way than I ever could! Great one liner, and even better one for the contest! Cheers David

Tom Woody
Date: 4/4/2025 2:06:00 PM

Agreed

Ink Empress
Date: 4/4/2025 11:36:00 AM

Thank you so much, your take on the prompt was amazing too so deeply moving. Always a pleasure hearing from you . Grateful truly

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/3/2025 3:42:00 PM

beautiful verse, very inspiring and sweet, thanks IE

Ink Empress
Date: 4/4/2025 11:31:00 AM

Thank you so very much truly

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2025 12:51:00 PM

very pretty, Ink. Oh my, I saw the theme you typed out and thought, um, that does not look like how she would write. haha. Of course it wasn't! Your poem appears way down low on the page, so I was focused on the top part first time I saw it!

Ink Empress
Date: 4/4/2025 10:39:00 AM

Hahah you kno me too well it has to be some fluff if its me ! You are the best sweet andrea haha

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/3/2025 12:23:00 PM

What a wonderful Monoku write. You told a story in just one line. Hooray!!! "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a lovely day writing away..................

Ink Empress
Date: 4/4/2025 10:38:00 AM

Awwn thank you for the hooray so sweet

Tom Woody

Date: 4/3/2025 11:39:00 AM

Sensually appealing one liner Inkstress

Ink Empress
Date: 4/4/2025 10:37:00 AM

Thank you so much always, tomsz

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/3/2025 11:10:00 AM

- What a wonderful feeling, Ink :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Ink Empress
Date: 4/4/2025 10:35:00 AM

Thank you dear anne lise always grateful for your kind support