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"My whole life makes me smile in so many ways, even looking in the mirror makes me laugh these days." Quote by The Poet When the early perfumed jasmine is in bloom, It tells me that spring time is coming soon. On a long lonely day that seems to have no end, It's a wonderful feeling to get a call from a friend. Near the end of a day when all work is done, To sit holding your hand in the warmth of the sun. Looking at pictures of my family with loving pride. Living in the knowledge that God is on my side. Going to sleep at night knowing I've done my best, Happy in the knowledge that I am truly blessed. Living with faith that He will answer my prayer, For those affected by war will receive His loving care. Watching through my window, happy children at play. The first burst of warmth showering on a winter's day. The soft sound of rain splashing on my roof, The good it does will be the colorful flowers as proof. When I am on a train and my shopping is complete, And a handsome young man offers this old lady a seat. When I check the bank and add up all my stuff, And my budget balance shows I have just enough. So many things in my wonderful life make me smile. I could carry on to make a list as long as a mile. But the one thing that truly makes it all worth while, Is the warmth and kindness I feel when I receive a smile.

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Date: 5/23/2025 7:53:00 AM
A beautiful trophy win. I thought it had to be one thing but you gave many awesome things that make you smile. Congrats
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Date: 5/23/2025 9:08:00 AM
Oh Andrea, I had to find out what your one thing is. Your poem made me so hungry I nearly raced to the fridge! I had a bit of a health scare lately and am on a very low fat diet. I have to check the fat content of everything I eat and not one food delight that makes you smile, am I allowed have. I simply love your poem but I dare not read it again ! BTW thanks for your lovely comment !
Date: 5/22/2025 7:08:00 PM
I loved reading this; perhaps, in part, due to poetic prowess or reassuring rhyming rhetoric but largely in the expression of gratitude. I love appreciating the small things in life - for in reality they are the big things. A beautiful poem. Blessings and smiles S:)) xx
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Date: 5/23/2025 4:30:00 AM
I told my kids and now my grandkids, try to make a happy memory every day, because one day, those memories will be the most precious things you have. Thanks for your warming comment my friend, I think we follow the beat of the same drum. Best wishes,, Wen
Date: 5/21/2025 2:38:00 AM
Simple pleasures of life, youv expressed so well here in such a seamless manner! Congratulations on your trophy win dear sv! Happy to see you winning! Sending you light always
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Date: 5/21/2025 9:04:00 AM
I had a feeling you would be here to tell me you liked it :) To me the best sign of a friend, is when they are truly happy for your success. Thank you so much my friend. Best wishes from Wen,
Date: 5/19/2025 1:19:00 PM
A sincere CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Date: 5/21/2025 8:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Janice, your comment is very much appreciated :)
Date: 5/19/2025 9:34:00 AM
Hearty Congratulations on your wonderful win for your heartwarming poem, dear Wendy. Hope life makes you smile.
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Date: 5/21/2025 8:54:00 AM
My lovely friend, with all the sadness in today's world, those that are able to still smile must lead by example to others, as the least we can do, to spread our smiles of encouragement to help others carry on. I find, if we look hard enough there is always a reason to smile. Thank you for your lovely comment.
Date: 5/19/2025 12:32:00 AM
Wonderful write. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/21/2025 8:45:00 AM
I appreciate your kind comment, Sincere thanks.
Date: 5/18/2025 8:03:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem!
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Date: 5/21/2025 8:44:00 AM
Thank you so much Trina. Best wishes from Wen.
Date: 5/18/2025 8:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win in my contest! I loved the quote! The entire poem was a pleasure to read with tact, humor and pleasant reminders of the many reasons you smile and we should too! I appreciate your support for my contest Speaks Volumes!
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Date: 5/21/2025 8:43:00 AM
Thanks so much Karen for your encouraging words, and for the honour of being placed prominently in your contest. Gave me another reason to smile ! Best wishes from Wen.
Date: 5/18/2025 1:46:00 PM
I must add that I smile when my life gets a new lease,.............. with light from Empress and a hug from Anne-Lise.
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Date: 5/21/2025 8:03:00 AM
Awwn thats such a sweet thing to say!!! Sending you more light dear sv, always
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Karen Jones
Date: 5/18/2025 7:57:00 PM
Awwwwe sweet

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