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What Is That Noise

The wind produced a flapping sound. 
I looked from treetops to the ground
but wasn’t able to decide
its origin, though hard I tried.

The wind died down. I read my book
there in my comfy front-porch nook.
When once again the cool breeze stirred,
the loud, distracting sound I heard.

Then from the corner of my eye,
I saw the U. S. flag we fly
so proudly only yards away
at city hall on grand display.

The flapping noise then sounded sweet.
Long may that wind-blown flag compete
with all the other sounds and sights;
it is the one that most delights.



entered in the Strand Completely New Poetry Contest, 5
on July 4, 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 8:35 PM
this is so delightful. You are quite a patriotic poet!
Canerdy Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 8:42 PM
Thank you for this wonderful comment, Andrea! Janice
Kauffman Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 12:19 AM
You have done justice to the flag. I love the progression of the stanzas. Long may it wave! We cannot be silent! Congratulations!
Canerdy Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 3:16 PM
Thanks so much, Sam. Janice
Wolf Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 12:23 PM
The only question is: How much longer will the stars and stripes be proudly flown? I imagine that a new flag is in the offing sooner rather than later. Francis Scott Key's statue's been toppled. They're after George Washington's now... Will Betsy Ross' creation survive? Hmm. Time for a backlash against the mindless zombies, methinks. :) gw
Canerdy Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 12:34 PM
Thanks, Gershon. Janice
Rose  Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 11:39 AM
Stand proud and patriotically and dont' lose hope, the days will get better I promise, until then, keep sharing your delightful poetry it sure helps xo
Canerdy Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 12:26 PM
Pixie Dust, THANK YOU for this uplifting comment! Janice
Watt Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 7:47 PM
Janice, a wonderful entry for Independence Day, it stirred my patriotic heart. I loved its flow and rhymes. Going in my faves ~ John
Canerdy Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 8:55 PM
John, I am HONORED! Thanks so much. Janice
Leffanta Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 1:47 PM
A stirring moment indeed! Aloha! Rico
Canerdy Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 1:55 PM
Thanks so much, Rico. Janice
Pandit Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 7:15 AM
Loved this ode and salute to the flag, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 7:56 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Mcintosh Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 5:45 AM
Such a grand poem. I love it, dear friend. Love and prayers for a blessed fourth of July.
Canerdy Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 7:56 AM
Thanks so much, Regina. Janice
Krutsinger Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 10:03 PM
Wonderfully penned. The flag brings patriotism in our hearts so fast!
Canerdy Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 7:57 AM
Thanks so much, Caren. Janice
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