Sara Kendrick Poet Diminished Hexaverse

What Is Out There In the Universe

What is out there_stars
They say that there's Mars
Then that fickled Moon
Wans and grows_shines_glows
Contains a face_space

The Milky Way
Glows night and day
Spiraling speed
Meets all our needs

What where why
What being
Created 

All this
Beauty

God

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Carol Sunshine Brown October 25, 2010 at 10:07 AM Congratulations Sara on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carol

John Freeman October 15, 2010 at 6:17 PM Congratulations Sara on your poem's placement. Agape, Moses

Mike Butler September 17, 2010 at 2:55 PM Congrats on the well deserved win! A lovely piece. Take care, -Mike

Dr.Ram Mehta September 17, 2010 at 12:52 PM Congratulations on this wonderful entry, Sara

Caryl Muzzey September 17, 2010 at 9:05 AM A wonderful write, congratulations on your win. Caryl

Francine Roberts September 17, 2010 at 7:48 AM lovely, congrats on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown September 17, 2010 at 6:46 AM Congratulations on your win Sara in Rick Parise's contest "The Universe" Love, Carol

Wilma Neels September 17, 2010 at 12:09 AM Sara, congrats on your win in Rick's contest, love Wilma

Tahera Mannan September 16, 2010 at 10:22 PM Many congratulations on your winning this great piece.

Charles Henderson September 16, 2010 at 9:04 PM good thought Sara. Congratulations. Charles

Constance La France September 16, 2010 at 8:23 PM Congratulations on 12th place ~~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 16, 2010 at 3:20 PM Congrats Sara on your super win in the Universe contest... a lovely piece.. enjoy your sweet victory..hope u are feeling better today .. prayers still sent your way for u and family too..with luv..

James Fraser September 16, 2010 at 1:27 PM Congratulation's Sara on your fine win in Rick's contest >> James

Carolyn Devonshire September 16, 2010 at 12:51 PM Congratulations on your success in Rick's contest, Sara! Hope your pain is subsiding and that Tommy Jr.'s recovery is continuing. Love, Carolyn

Hyle Chu September 11, 2010 at 9:43 AM Great way to express how God is the Alpha and Omega with this Diminished Hexaverse.

Doris Culverhouse September 10, 2010 at 6:25 PM I thought i had commented on this one already...great job. Are you all good? Caleb didn't give you any bad germs did he?

Mike Butler September 10, 2010 at 1:57 PM This is a lovely write Sara. Thank you for your wonderful comments. Take care. -Mike

Carol Sunshine Brown September 10, 2010 at 9:44 AM What a beautiful day to sit and read poetry here at PoetrySoup. Please keep writing and sharing your poems with us. What a diverse group of poets we have here I am so happy you are one of us Sara. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Daver Austin September 10, 2010 at 8:31 AM Love it! The mystery is for me - is the whole "Big Bang" and on, just one of God's experiments? Good luck in the contest. Love, Dave

John Taylor September 9, 2010 at 1:39 PM Nice piece. I particularly like the first stanza. Thanks for your kind comments. Good luck in the contest.

Chuck Keys September 9, 2010 at 1:11 PM another great work ... made me feel good, thanks, chuck

Poet Destroyer A September 9, 2010 at 11:53 AM Nice and cute Sara, i wonder what else is out , lol, maybe like the movies. Enjoyed the rhyme,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire September 9, 2010 at 11:23 AM When we look around at the universe, we have many questions, Sara. But the answer is always the same. Beautiful gifts from God! Great use of the form and I love the content. Love, Carolyn