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What Is Out There In the Universe

What is out there_stars They say that there's Mars Then that fickled Moon Wans and grows_shines_glows Contains a face_space The Milky Way Glows night and day Spiraling speed Meets all our needs What where why What being Created All this Beauty God

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/25/2010 10:07:00 AM

Congratulations Sara on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 10/15/2010 6:17:00 PM

Congratulations Sara on your poem's placement. Agape, Moses

Mike Butler

Date: 9/17/2010 2:55:00 PM

Congrats on the well deserved win! A lovely piece. Take care, -Mike

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/17/2010 12:52:00 PM

Congratulations on this wonderful entry, Sara

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/17/2010 9:05:00 AM

A wonderful write, congratulations on your win. Caryl

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/17/2010 7:48:00 AM

lovely, congrats on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/17/2010 6:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Sara in Rick Parise's contest "The Universe" Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/17/2010 12:09:00 AM

Sara, congrats on your win in Rick's contest, love Wilma

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/16/2010 10:22:00 PM

Many congratulations on your winning this great piece.

Charles Henderson

Date: 9/16/2010 9:04:00 PM

good thought Sara. Congratulations. Charles

Constance La France

Date: 9/16/2010 8:23:00 PM

Congratulations on 12th place ~~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/16/2010 3:20:00 PM

Congrats Sara on your super win in the Universe contest... a lovely piece.. enjoy your sweet victory..hope u are feeling better today .. prayers still sent your way for u and family too..with luv..

James Fraser

Date: 9/16/2010 1:27:00 PM

Congratulation's Sara on your fine win in Rick's contest >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/16/2010 12:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your success in Rick's contest, Sara! Hope your pain is subsiding and that Tommy Jr.'s recovery is continuing. Love, Carolyn

Hyle Chu

Date: 9/11/2010 9:43:00 AM

Great way to express how God is the Alpha and Omega with this Diminished Hexaverse.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/10/2010 6:25:00 PM

I thought i had commented on this one already...great job. Are you all good? Caleb didn't give you any bad germs did he?

Mike Butler

Date: 9/10/2010 1:57:00 PM

This is a lovely write Sara. Thank you for your wonderful comments. Take care. -Mike

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/10/2010 9:44:00 AM

What a beautiful day to sit and read poetry here at PoetrySoup. Please keep writing and sharing your poems with us. What a diverse group of poets we have here I am so happy you are one of us Sara. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Daver Austin

Date: 9/10/2010 8:31:00 AM

Love it! The mystery is for me - is the whole "Big Bang" and on, just one of God's experiments? Good luck in the contest. Love, Dave

John Taylor

Date: 9/9/2010 1:39:00 PM

Nice piece. I particularly like the first stanza. Thanks for your kind comments. Good luck in the contest.

Chuck Keys

Date: 9/9/2010 1:11:00 PM

another great work ... made me feel good, thanks, chuck

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/9/2010 11:53:00 AM

Nice and cute Sara, i wonder what else is out , lol, maybe like the movies. Enjoyed the rhyme,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/9/2010 11:23:00 AM

When we look around at the universe, we have many questions, Sara. But the answer is always the same. Beautiful gifts from God! Great use of the form and I love the content. Love, Carolyn