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What If Later Never Comes

You know I love it if I set it aside to enjoy later What am I saving for tomorrow you ask And more importantly why Why save things for another time What if there is no next time I have drawers filled with special somethings Set aside for a close or distant future Lured to believe tomorrow may Be more special than today Another lie caught in a loop What if later never comes Yesterday’s tomorrow is totally today And isn’t it the only day that matters Memories of longing and having to do without Unhealed scars rise to the surface My distant past not so distant after all Failing to move with the times Still living in the past Lesson in the learning of he who wins Now has the empty drawer of Delays, what-ifs and for-laters AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on November 17, 2018

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Date: 11/18/2018 1:11:00 PM
I think that this a gem, Line. Each couplet is a variation on the theme, and the theme surely resonates with so many of us, myself included. Well-done! :) gw
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Date: 11/18/2018 10:58:00 AM
Nice one dear...easy to understand!
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Date: 11/18/2018 11:03:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment.
Date: 11/17/2018 11:17:00 PM
Beautifully penned; we should live within the moment; excellent advice.
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Date: 11/17/2018 11:38:00 PM
Ongoing struggle to incorporate in one's lifestyle...
Date: 11/17/2018 11:16:00 PM
The crux of this poem "Yesterday’s tomorrow is totally today And isn’t it the only day that matters" is sagely wise, Line.
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Date: 11/17/2018 11:39:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.
Date: 11/17/2018 4:57:00 PM
oh, i can so relate to this, line! i also save things for that "special" day, but i could be enjoying them right now! maybe you'll be my inspiration for changing (or at least trying to)...
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Date: 11/17/2018 6:41:00 PM
I sincerely hope so, Ilene. I stopped buying clothes two years before retiring because I realized that I could never wear out everything in my closet. We need to do the same with everything in our special drawer... realizing that our time is not unlimited. Line xx
Date: 11/17/2018 4:24:00 PM
We cannot live in the past in the fear of moving forward. Now is a bitter moment then the last, I have enjoyed your poem on tomorrow .
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Date: 11/17/2018 6:42:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Pixie.
Date: 11/17/2018 3:42:00 PM
Love this, Line, and I can totally relate. FAVED for sure.
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Date: 11/17/2018 6:42:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and most appreciated compliment, Carole.

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