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What If

What if God hadn’t planned the world, in his exact and perfect way? He might have left out all the flowers, that brighten up the day. If he hadn’t made the sun so bright or the moonlight so subdued, how would that affect the ocean’s tide, or the growing of our food? Perhaps the bees and butterflies, would not fit in the scheme and we’d go to sleep in daylight and were never meant to dream. If the sunrise and the sunset did not come in Technicolor and the sky was always darkest gray, or some hue even duller; if the only animal he made, was the hippopotamus or maybe just for fun he’d add the big rhinoceros and the others things He gave us, were slugs and bugs and such; do you think we would be happy? Would we like that very much? And now I’ve had a dreadful thought. I’m elated its not true. Suppose in his forgetfulness, He’d forgotten to make you. Would he see how very sad I was, if I had never met you? That’s a very silly question, ‘cause God never could forget you. For Desiree's contest "What If"

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Date: 6/15/2011 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM in Desiree's "What If" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2011 3:05:00 PM
Congrats on your HM, Joyce. excellent piece. Great job. xxxRalph
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Date: 6/14/2011 3:03:00 PM
Congrats on your HM, Joyce. Enjoyed. Excellent piece. Great job. xxxRalph
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Date: 6/14/2011 1:52:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of desiree, Joyce
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Date: 6/14/2011 1:25:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your HM in this contest of What If with another unique and exciting entry my friend..enjoy honor ...luv..
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Date: 6/14/2011 1:25:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your HM in this What If contest with another exciting entry luv.. enjoy honor for excellence in poetry my friend...
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Date: 6/13/2011 7:00:00 AM
wonderful musings :) Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 6/11/2011 9:40:00 PM
I have always asked what if, i should enter this contest, i have been asking that all my life, my wife says, yes, but it didn't happen, i say i know, but what if. i love this contest and it will be hard to pick a winner, but good luck yours is a good. thank you for commenting on Heaven's Delight.
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Date: 6/11/2011 8:59:00 AM
You will do well in this contest.I feel it...Thanks again for enjoying my poems.Have a great day,Sincerely,Kacey....
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Date: 6/11/2011 8:09:00 AM
Beautiful poem Joyce. I hope it does well in the contest. Mike
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Date: 6/10/2011 7:27:00 PM
Very creative write here Joyce...enjoyed..Best wishes.
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Date: 6/10/2011 6:53:00 PM
I love this poem, Joyce, it is really, really wonderful, and I wish you the best in the contest~~
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Date: 6/10/2011 6:38:00 PM
Awww, Joyce. You've had me on so many different planes here. A tender ending which left me with goosebumps. A delightful read. :-)
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