What If

What if God hadn’t planned the world,
in his exact and perfect way?
He might have left out all the flowers,
that brighten up the day.
If he hadn’t made the sun so bright
or the moonlight so subdued,
how would that affect the ocean’s tide,
or the growing of our food?
Perhaps the bees and butterflies,
would not fit in the scheme
and we’d go to sleep in daylight
and were never meant to dream.
If the sunrise and the sunset
did not come in Technicolor
and the sky was always darkest gray,
or some hue even duller;
if the only animal he made,
was the hippopotamus
or maybe just for fun he’d add
the big rhinoceros
and the others things He gave us,
were slugs and bugs and such;
do you think we would be happy?
Would we like that very much?
And now I’ve had a dreadful thought.
I’m elated its not true.
Suppose in his forgetfulness,
He’d forgotten to make you.
Would he see how very sad I was,
if I had never met you?
That’s a very silly question, ‘cause
God never could forget you.

                                                                   For Desiree's contest "What If"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 10:52 AM
Congratulations on your HM in Desiree's "What If" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 3:05 PM
Congrats on your HM, Joyce. excellent piece. Great job. xxxRalph
Taylor Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 3:03 PM
Congrats on your HM, Joyce. Enjoyed. Excellent piece. Great job. xxxRalph
Mehta Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 1:52 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of desiree, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 1:25 PM
Congrats Joyce on your HM in this What If contest with another exciting entry luv.. enjoy honor for excellence in poetry my friend...
Sweetheart Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 1:25 PM
Congrats Joyce on your HM in this contest of What If with another unique and exciting entry my friend..enjoy honor ...luv..
Susan Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 7:00 AM
wonderful musings :) Good luck in the contest!
Foulk Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 9:40 PM
I have always asked what if, i should enter this contest, i have been asking that all my life, my wife says, yes, but it didn't happen, i say i know, but what if. i love this contest and it will be hard to pick a winner, but good luck yours is a good. thank you for commenting on Heaven's Delight.
Greenlee Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 8:59 AM
You will do well in this contest.I feel it...Thanks again for enjoying my poems.Have a great day,Sincerely,Kacey....
Dailey Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 8:09 AM
Beautiful poem Joyce. I hope it does well in the contest. Mike
Poet Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 7:27 PM
Very creative write here Joyce...enjoyed..Best wishes.
La France Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 6:53 PM
I love this poem, Joyce, it is really, really wonderful, and I wish you the best in the contest~~
Hendricks Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 6:38 PM
Awww, Joyce. You've had me on so many different planes here. A tender ending which left me with goosebumps. A delightful read. :-)
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