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I could put you on a pedestal lay pretty flowers at your feet bring you all of my attention your adoration I could preach But my love for you is not fleeting and to others I don't wish to show I hold you in my every heartbeat and into each gentle kiss I bestow I whisper that you are beautiful and I wear your loving smile I place my arms around you because you compliment my style I won't flaunt your graces I won't fawn your stunning looks but every inch of love I have is living, in those glances that I took Last night while you were sleeping I lie awake in the stillness and stared I touched your skin and caressed you easing all my inner chaos and my fear I could climb a thousand mountains tell all the world this love is great but I'd rather just hold your hand and leave all the rest but up to fate

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Date: 12/18/2017 8:03:00 AM
So romantic Tim <3 <3 <3
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Date: 12/17/2017 9:00:00 PM
It's soooo very good. So softly romantic and just beautiful...Ahhh, girls just wanna be loved! Lol! Kidding aside, but Tim, as always, beautidul work... hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 12/16/2017 8:05:00 PM
I love when you write like this, Tim. So tender and romantic!
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Date: 12/16/2017 3:54:00 PM
Lovely and romantic, Tim! Yes, you could leave it up to fate, although some things a woman would love to hear! Regards // paul
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Date: 12/15/2017 12:26:00 PM
an absolutely beautiful romantic gem Tim! Into my faves:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/15/2017 11:15:00 AM
This is love...pure, simple, and all encompassing of a heart's emotions.
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Date: 12/15/2017 10:53:00 AM
Damn you're good.
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Date: 12/15/2017 10:08:00 AM
Very nice Tim! Well written :)
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