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What I Hear

When I get very quiet I listen and I hear My every breath rushing through my lungs My pulse swishing through my veins My heart beating to their rhythm I close my eyes And hear beauty in my head First spring rain nursing the sleepy earth Summer sun shooting its darts of gold Rattling of autumn leaves at my feet Wintry snowflakes land on fluffy pine branches When I get very quiet I occasionally hear Wind gushing through my hair Unbridled laughter of a little girl Clouds whispering my name AP: 2nd place 2021, Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on September 28, 2017 for contest PREMIERE #100 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

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Date: 9/28/2017 4:33:00 PM
Hi Line , nice to meet and thank you for comments on my writes , you have a beautiful imagination and wonderful flow , I love the way your write starts ' when ( I ) get very quite ' mindfulness I so enjoyed reading this ::))) hugs from Ireland
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/29/2017 12:24:00 PM
Hugs from Ireland !! Well that makes my day! Thank you so much and right back at you !! V Please visit again.

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