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What Finally Set Me Off (Part 2)

(conclusion to previous "poem" here) One afternoon, our home phone rang and I began, as usual, a heartfelt chat with Sheila. My memory is dim. What we talked of I can’t quite recall. I only know one thing: I was being steered by my best friend, steered toward spilling secrets of my soul. Danny was the topic and somehow Margo’s name arose. Maybe I spoke ill of her; I just don’t know. Best friends tell all. So I suppose I mentioned she was not the one for Danny, which led to other things. . . Another voice then came on the phone!! Margo, on another line, was listening to my every word. I felt the blood inside my usually cool veins start running hot. I slammed the phone down, shaking at my core. Perhaps I screamed. Mother stood, aghast, and I suppose I told her of the trick they’d played on me as out the door I ran down the block, quite unafraid, to face my traitor friend. To this day I can’t recall a thing I did or said at Sheila’s house. It’s possible that Margo fled and wasn’t even there. But what remains with me, almost vivid, is what happened when I got back home. Mom was in the kitchen when I walked in. She wore a grin. And how well I remember this: My ever faithful mom raised her hands, clapping them together, applauding me as I walked in the door. (for those interested: an epilogue: Interestingly, Margo got her way and snagged the guy. I recall the steamed up windows of Danny's car parked in front of our jr. high, where he picked Margo up each day. They got married and pregnant, didn't finish school. Danny even robbed the service station where he worked. I guess times were so hard for them. I think he and Margo both later joined the army (divorced by then I believe). As far as I know he is now remarried with many other children. Sheila, true to her family's ways, also got married before high school. I would babysit her firstborn for her sometimes after school. She divorced and eventually remarried a very nice guy, a Pentacostal like herself. They moved back to her beloved Alabama. I send her a card every Christmas though she never has given one to me. I think she gets my cards, however, since they don't come back, and strangely, about every ten years, out of the blue, she gives me a call. We are in our 50's now. It's about time for another phone call, and I am wondering if one day the calls will stop.)

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Date: 8/28/2022 7:36:00 AM
A wonderful heartfelt poem, Andrea. Looking back through and reading some of your first year poems. I had a similiar thing happen to me, my dream girl fell for the bad boy high school senior that would do the things, little Biil wouldn't when in junior high. lol An insight into the person you are today. Hugs my friend, Bill P.S. Read both parts of the poem, one comment. :-)
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Date: 11/4/2017 11:44:00 AM
Hi Andrea. I cannot believe that I read this entire story. But you made it so interesting. Yes, you hooked me line and sinker, and I could not let go. Great piece my friend. I must find part 1. Blessings.
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Date: 10/31/2017 11:10:00 AM
Oh!....this is so interesting Andrea and touching. I hope the phone call don't stop. Well written.:) Sunita
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Date: 8/12/2017 1:46:00 PM
wow. i felt like in an episode of a romance drama, with all the heartstrings tugging; the ending made me sad too, i guess that's life. well written, Andrea. God bless!
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Date: 6/24/2012 8:17:00 PM
Hooray, I found your previous poems! This is all the background info needed to understand the feud. Teenage girls can be cruel. I think I already said that! I love how your mom encouraged you to defend yourself, though. She sounds great. Many moms do not teach their daughters to assert themselves in a positive way. You sound a lot like me. I have a couple of friends I talk to once every few years, and I send Christmas cards to a few people who do not send one to me. I feel like it's the right thing to do... I enjoyed your stories. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/27/2012 9:51:00 AM
do we learn from our mistakes, some times we do and sometimes we do not. interesting story, interesting in the fact that although we here are many cultures greeds and nationalities, i think it would a sure bet that this wonderful poem, is reacted out many many times over in the world today. awesome Andrea. harry
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Date: 2/5/2011 7:32:00 PM
Interesting story. I found out long ago, things aren't always as good or as bad as they seem. You had a good mother. Most moms want whats best for their kids. Vince
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Date: 1/18/2011 4:39:00 AM
Way to go Andrea :) this brought memories back of something I did almost in a similar situation hehe.. You mom must have been so proud that day.. I enjoyed this very much hey..love Wilma
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Date: 1/13/2011 10:56:00 AM
Enjoyed a wonderful story of your life Andrea-kashinath
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Date: 2/1/2010 11:17:00 PM
and I'm clapping right along with your mother! she also deserves applause btw--real life sure can beat soap operas any time ;) what I really liked about this is how you grew from it and showed just how strong you can be :) wonderful story in your write, Andrea, really enjoyed this :)
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Date: 1/25/2010 3:31:00 PM
great story. Danny's name reminds me of a guy i liked three years back in seventh grade as well.funny.i remember him flirting with me and every girl basically in the school.aha.silly times before i knew myself. some girls are petty at teen years but there is always the smarter ones to even it out!!!<: -Always Lynette
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Date: 1/25/2010 6:50:00 AM
All this things that happen along the road of life and the lessons we learn from them . Life is not for the faint of heart. I felt all your emotional pain. Fantastic writing, Andrea. Love, lainie
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Date: 1/24/2010 9:14:00 AM
Andrea, what a wonderful segment from your life, and thank you for kindly sharing it >> you truly are the better friend >> James
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Date: 1/23/2010 6:05:00 PM
Dear Andrea, Your story of betrayal and the courage it took you to face your friend was so touching. I loved your mother's reaction standing, as mothers do, always in your corner. This poem says so much about you and your personality and how cruel childhood teen years can be. Your epilogue tells it all and I really had to laugh a bit over Danny robbing the station he worked for. Gosh did they all do you a favor! What a great poem! Mahalo, Connie
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Date: 1/23/2010 4:34:00 PM
back again. Still thinking about it. I would have loved to see a video of your Mom when you came back home and she started applauding you! Bet that was really really cool! :) Lert's see..what actress could we get to play her part. .hmmm
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Date: 1/23/2010 4:29:00 PM
Great story Andrea! I really like it lots. You wrote it very well. I feel like I just read a good book! Couldn't you use this for the contest too? I'm not familiar with the contest yet but sure looks like it. Anyway nice yu've got a choice. Wonderful story. Thank you!
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Date: 1/23/2010 3:41:00 PM
thank you for everything.
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Date: 1/23/2010 2:29:00 PM
Wow,...this is the reason why pranks are pulled, and mothers are cool,...to give the poets vent ! Awesome writing friend ! james
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Date: 1/23/2010 1:10:00 PM
A sad tale of betrayal but with a happy ending. I enjoyed this piece(s) very much and I'm not pretending. Again, a great write Andrea. Best Wishes Always, Bill
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Date: 1/23/2010 12:44:00 PM
Nice write but FULL of drama.good job on this one.Hope you are well.
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Date: 1/23/2010 2:32:00 AM
It's a real drama! Good enough for a soap opera... And like your mother, I applaud your standing up for yourself at last! Kids can do cruel things and make bad decisions. The annual card that you send shows your loving mature nature. She must need you about every 10 years... and has the courage to call because you have remained kind even after what she did... Great betrayal story. Smiling at your courage and talent. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 1/23/2010 12:31:00 AM
Interesting presentation Andrea.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 1/22/2010 8:23:00 PM
I often wonder, because I know I'm still a child, if I'll fall or rise like you did. I guess great human spirits are ever enduring, you've given me much to think about. Thank you
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Date: 1/22/2010 6:31:00 PM
Well u turned out to be the better friend and grew from this experience.. as we all find out sooner or later.. people come and go in our lives for whatever reason.. some just break our hearts but we become stronger .. u are a sensitive soul with great qualities... so enjoyed your narrative tonight... great job relaying this hurtful story but see the positives if u can.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/22/2010 1:11:00 PM
Tough call, enjoyed reading today!!
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