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As I was about to enter the frontier of a forest I was greeted by a Bunyan tree at the very entrance It started talking to me in a language audible That could be wisely deciphered as follows; “I am a Bunyan tree, full of magic and grace Nestling among smaller trees in our forest kingdom From a tiny seed dropped by a bird, I grew Into immeasurable size with a verdant crown Now a vast territory is under my domain I stretch and swing my arms all around Support my body on a hundred legs That no storm or gale can uproot me My leafy arms are curved to the ground Forming a maze of arches and tangy knots With an enigmatic darkness hovering Where birds roost and squirrels run about When I bear fruits, the feathered folks come in flocks Green parrots, bulbuls, mynas and crows Squabbling with each other for my scarlet gems Leaving me noisy with their mad crescendo I proudly host these denizens of land and air Never resisting their obtrusive invasion I offer them shade and shelter, making them joyful As they hop about and romance among my branches I never set any boundaries as I find joy In exploring and conquering And into newer and newer realms, I move With none hindering my encroachment Sad, when we are grown, men hack us and cut us down Now my only prayer is that no axe should fall on us As we trees supply tons of oxygen for man and beast And without us, life never can thrive or flourish” ____________________________________________ Placed Second May.19. 2022 Wisdom From Trees Poetry Contest Sponsor- Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Date: 6/2/2022 1:27:00 AM
I knowI left a comment on this marvelous poem Valsa, but I don’t see it anywhere. It was pretty late at night, maybe they were house cleaning? I love your beautiful poem my friend. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/28/2022 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful/Creative" write and picture. I love this tree. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 5/28/2022 10:36:00 AM
Valsa, you have written a poem of great beauty. Back with congratulations on winning placement. You definitely earn it.
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Date: 5/21/2022 4:04:00 AM
Valsa, you write with insight and communicate a compelling message through your writing. You gave the fluttering of the foliage and the waving of the trees a voice. Banyans are a popular tree for songbirds to nest in because they offer protection from the elements. You have selected an intriguing tree to write about.
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Date: 5/19/2022 7:50:00 PM
God gave man dominion over every thing. But the way you speak of this one it may live just because of it's size. Poetry are part of legends you may not be the only one to have writen of this tree.
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Date: 5/19/2022 10:53:00 AM
Banyan trees are really messy and require constant care, but boys and girls have great fun swinging on its roots and adults treasure the shade banyans provide! Birds love the shelter banyans provide, so you have chosen quite an interesting tree to write about! Aloha!
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Date: 5/19/2022 4:52:00 AM
You gave voice to the rustling leaves and swaying trees. Insightful write, Valsa--a powerful message you convey.
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Date: 5/19/2022 1:09:00 AM
So many trees are hacked for wood. Pity. There should be an increse to sow more trees.
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Date: 5/19/2022 12:44:00 AM
If only the trees could talk they would certainly have a great story to tell, when the trees are all gone then so are we. Well written verse Valsa. Good luck Tom
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Date: 5/19/2022 12:55:00 AM
Definitely they will ! Their voices may not be audible, but the tales they silently speak will put us to shame and can impart valuable lessons for us. Thanks a lot Tom....

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