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What Defines Us

It is not enough to merely exist Taking up space amassing excess wealth Living contented apart from the world No foothold, no foundation Looking out for “me and mine” Rolling through life like a tumbleweed Through desert wastelands Picking up trash and debris along the way Deluding ourselves that this junk defines us We are not merely flesh but spirit We have a foundation. A steadfast grounding Like the air we can be free! No boundary truly holds us We are formed by The Word which nourishes our soul Look to your neighbor. He is the reason you are here Live in the spirit, give of your time, raise him up! Look into his eyes. What do you see? He sees what you see An immortal soul reflected. This is what defines you!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/20/2010 9:22:00 PM
awesome poem... thanks for the comments... glad you liked it but that isnt a reference to the bible... granted u can take it as you please... im not saying i dont believe in religion... ours is just corrupted... full of half truths and whole lies : /... those are my words and beliefs personally... but once again thanks for the comments looking forward to reading more of your intreguing<-- (doesnt look right)... work <3
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Date: 1/19/2010 10:40:00 AM
Audrey beautifully said and wonderfully written. I totally agree that society needs a wake up call! I enjoyed reading this amazing piece. ~Donielle~
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Date: 1/15/2010 10:20:00 PM
Although I can't say I agree with your message, I do find your writing and imagery lovely. And in the end poetry is a message, the eloquent words written within, and the grace-worn parchment we chose to embed it in.
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Date: 1/14/2010 11:54:00 AM
audrey your poetry really speaks to me! good write
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Date: 1/10/2010 1:39:00 AM
Hi Audrey, nice work...God bless you , ma'am. love, Girish
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Date: 1/8/2010 11:11:00 PM
Very nice inspirational write! Audrey. And I agree. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 1/8/2010 7:35:00 PM
Very nice Audrey..Enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 1/8/2010 4:16:00 PM
Such an uplifting piece, one to encourage more of us to reach out, help and support our neighbor. Well done, Audrey! Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/8/2010 4:03:00 PM
That Spirit was designed to flow through us to help others whatever their need. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/8/2010 3:20:00 PM
Hi Audrey, Love the sentiments you pen here! This world would REALLY be something if everyone thought like that! Very profound and is a enduring testament to your beautiful spirit. Going to my fav. May your pen never run dry my friend! Keep writing!! Love Patty PS your email didn't come through.
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