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What Awaits-TET

Sleep A Taste In This Life Of What Awaits Streams of Consciousness Slowly Leaving Earth Returning Whence We Came -- To Our Maker Our Primal Source Of Life and Of Love Death April 24, 2019 Entry in 'Tectractys This Poetry' contest Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Date: 5/4/2019 7:15:00 AM
Gershon, I noticed you wrote this for my contest but for some reason it never showed up as an entry. Just wanted to let you know if it had you would have shared 1st place with the others. Great write my friend. Perhaps you forgot to enter it in or you may have entered too late or PS just screwed up (lol) All the best...Charlie
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Date: 5/4/2019 10:01:00 PM
Thanks for letting me know, Charlie. I must have forgotten to enter the poem in the contest, as you surmised. And without your comment, I wouldn't have remembered that! Senior moments increasing lately, for better or for (usually) worse. As I tell my wife, "I got old." (Can't think of any advantages in that, really). Blessings, Gershon
Date: 4/27/2019 1:57:00 PM
- We'll see what fate brings ... great written, Gershon - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/27/2019 9:50:00 PM
Thank you so much for the encouragement, Anne-Lise. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 4/25/2019 11:51:00 AM
I agree with WW. This is a winner! Elegant and eloquent :)
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Date: 4/25/2019 12:17:00 PM
Thank you so much for your support of this one. Appreciated! :) gw
Date: 4/25/2019 8:46:00 AM
Superbly done my friend...it awaits the winner's circle...^WW^
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Date: 4/25/2019 11:27:00 AM
Appreciate your generous evaluation of this one, WW. We'll see about that winner's circle. Time will tell. Thanks again, gw
Date: 4/24/2019 7:28:00 PM
Lovely, Gershon. A FAVE for me.
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Date: 4/24/2019 9:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line. It's always special for me when you FAVE something I've written. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 4/24/2019 6:28:00 PM
Perchance to sleep... Perhaps a totally different experience all together.
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Date: 4/24/2019 9:21:00 PM
A spear-shaker (groan) of a comment, there, Kim. Seriously, I sure do appreciate your support. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 4/24/2019 2:26:00 PM
Like how you wrote this Gershon, the big sleep awaits us all. Hopefully not too soon. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 4/24/2019 9:42:00 PM
Right on---Not too soon!! Here's to long life! :) gw
Date: 4/24/2019 2:26:00 PM
Sleep can indeed be spiritual, best of luck in the contest! (soupmail)
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Date: 4/24/2019 9:43:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle.