What Am I

I'm squirming in my chair of oak
with narrow arms, and folks lined up
in two long rows of growing thirst
and hunger for a breath of air

Like sardines in a can of worms
we are strange, unlikely shipmates torn
between one salesman's  limped  plea --
the other shark who disagrees

Gray flannel suit, the stiff white shirt
with slicked down hair,  accusing words
persuading few with his hot air
The black suit spews his declaration 
a quite contrary explanation

Until my mind is torn in two
and in a room we must decide
Confined inside, a dozen votes
where six say yay, six more say nope

We're hanging by a thread  for days
and rumor spreads, with dreadful words

He has finally coped with deadlocked folks
But sternly looks a bit provoked
We sit there like a row of stones
of wounded souls.  We are excused!

We grope for keys, and leave our thrones
And as I'm walking out the door
No longer needed any more
I see the face of one accused

Then count the blessings in my life
and take a breath of freedom's air
So glad to know some welcome arms 
are waiting there, at home




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"Person"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mehta Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Wonderfully penned poem on Who Am I , carrie
Hamilton Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 9:36 PM
in court Carrie congrats on win hugs
A   Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 8:49 PM
CARRIE, Congratulations on your well deserved winning poem.. Hail Yeah! to all the dragon slayer winners :-) :-) :-) *LINDA
Gorelick Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 1:59 PM
Congrats once again.. BG
May Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 10:03 AM
great write ...congrats on your win
Konos Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 8:59 PM
Thank you for entering my contest
Van Breda Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 12:35 PM
THIS POEM WAS BRILLIANT AND AT THE SAME TIME EDUCATIONAL FOR ME. WE DON'T HAVE A COMPULSORY JURY SYSTEM IN OUR COUNTRY.. S/AFRICA, SO IT GAVE ME A GLIMPSE INTO THE REALITY OF THE WHOLE SCENARIO.
La France Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 4:49 PM
Carrie, wonderful write for the contest, you are an amazing writer, best of luck but I am this is a winner and thanks for visiting my poems, constance
Colasurdo Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 8:56 PM
WOW!That's a really cool write Carrie. I truly loved how you penned this. A Talented write indeed. Love the last stanza : ) Bless you for stopping by Beccas blog to wish me a Happy Birthday it meant so much to me. Have a blessed Happy mothers day
Bauer Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 6:19 PM
you've captured jury duty perfectly! i very much enjoyed your poem...
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