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He asked if I could manage a huge one I said twelve inches would be fine I put the phone down, smile in anticipation My body sure quivers When Pedro delivers A meat feast pizza for me, its divine! 14th May 2015

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Rachel Preston

Date: 7/12/2015 4:45:00 PM

You have a wicked sense of humour - a woman after my own heart :-)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/13/2015 2:54:00 AM

I simply knew we had a connection Rachel lol - laughter is the best medicine and I have quite a few funny poems for you to read lol:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 5/29/2015 4:54:00 PM

Blimey I thought, a poem about me, blushing ;-) I love your naughty writes Jan, it's so refreshing here on the Soup. The Pizza delivery man has a 12" one, but he doesn't use it as a rule ;-) hugs always, James xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2015 4:56:00 PM

ha ha ha I have never had a home delivery of pizza James - our nearest Dominoes is 15 miles away .. we use the Chicago town frozen ones:-) Hugs Jan xx

Etienne Lariviere

Date: 5/29/2015 12:30:00 PM

Oh la la, Long and hard and now this! :) you rae one lucky gal!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2015 1:06:00 PM

lol I have never had a pizza delivered ever Etienne so i cannot comment further!:-) Hugs Jan xx

Funom Makama

Date: 5/16/2015 12:14:00 PM

incredible piece! Keeping on giving us such lovely lines. #7. Happy weekend

Jan Allison
Date: 5/16/2015 12:18:00 PM

Thanks so much for dropping by Funom:-) hugs Jan xx

Ivor Davies

Date: 5/15/2015 4:54:00 PM

12" round the outside?..................Or was that 12" thick?..............If you swallow one that's far too big...............It will only make you sick!..... .......especially pepperoni .....Ivor

Jan Allison
Date: 5/15/2015 4:55:00 PM

ha ha ha Ivor - love it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Peter Dome

Date: 5/15/2015 4:02:00 AM

What else?. I ordered one the other day, ham and pineapple, but they forgot the ham, but swore blind I got it. A bit of a sore point at the moment. Uhhmmm what can I eat?. I know!. Pete.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/15/2015 7:11:00 AM

We get the Chicago town frozen pizza - add mushrooms etc and it is a great meal and not at home delivery prices in fact have never had a home delivery of food here :-) Hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 5/14/2015 10:09:00 PM

This is not fair! You get everybody hot and bothered and then you stuff their face with Pizza! but .....I like your poem

Jan Allison
Date: 5/15/2015 1:39:00 AM

LOL You know me for a twist at the end lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Fisher

Date: 5/14/2015 6:45:00 PM

A good one, Jan! No matter how you slice it, I guess you were satisfied.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2015 7:09:00 PM

I love that comment David!:-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2015 3:55:00 PM

I just knew it was something like this. hahaha. Whopper indeed.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2015 5:27:00 PM

oh am I getting predictable lol :-) Hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/14/2015 12:30:00 PM

Oh Dear....Tim's COMMENT...TIM'S COMMENT! ;) Of course...you hit this one out of the ball park dear! :) GOOD ONE! I want some delivery...N O W!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2015 1:54:00 PM

LOL:-) Hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/14/2015 11:47:00 AM

Really divine because of it's taste perhaps. Beautifully done with one bullet. 7 sure. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2015 1:54:00 PM

Thanks so much BL:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 5/14/2015 9:18:00 AM

30 minutes or less or its free....lol

Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2015 9:19:00 AM

Never had a home delivery so I wouldn't know if it applies here lol:-) Hugs jan xx

John Williams

Date: 5/14/2015 8:44:00 AM

I can see you really like............pizza Good one Jan........John

Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2015 8:48:00 AM

Oh can't be a huge pepperoni pizza - we get 'Chicago Town' frozen ones and cook them at home - add some mushrooms and side salad and it is a brilliant meal:-) Hugs Jan xx