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What a Day

What a Day. Bright and early every waking minute passes me by without a look. Invisible to the world. All that is seen and unseen, Only an empty vessel carrying on a non-existent life. Soaring deep within the vessel we call life. It is blank and absent like minds lost in thought. Days pass without a notice. Time will not stop until the one is truly revealed. The one will guide you and you thoughts will clear. Lost in translation. The message of the day will forever be lost. What a day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/22/2015 3:48:00 PM
Hi Justin, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/21/2015 9:41:00 PM
Hi Justin, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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