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We'Re More Important Than Money

I’ve said money is not my everything but my everything has always been you I promised you when I gave you that ring for richer, or poorer we would get through no matter how much money we withdrew our love would be the richest of treasures material things aren’t always pleasures we can weather any storm we may face regardless of bumps we’re still together we’re not made of gold but in a rich place Ten lines of 10 syllables each line rhyme scheme: A-B-A-B-B-C-C-D-C-D Total # of syllables: 100 syllables Total # of words: 75 Written By: Laura Loo Date Written: April 29, 2016

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Date: 4/29/2016 6:12:00 PM
Very nicely said Laura, liked the rhyme scheme, liked the layout, liked the message true words, thanks, you have a gift.
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Date: 4/29/2016 6:52:00 PM
thank you very much John, have a blessed weekend :)-luloo
Date: 4/29/2016 5:53:00 PM
no truer statement was ever said when "money is the root of all evil "was said
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Date: 4/29/2016 6:52:00 PM
yes you are right Frederic have a blessed night :)-luloo

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