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I let you enter my garden And wander as you pleased I welcomed you within the fortress Where hides the elusive part of me Your feet gently walked its floors While your hands caressed its walls Tonight within the arms of my soul I held you in my dreams AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted on March 29, 2018

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Date: 3/30/2018 9:24:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Line. Your imagery is exquisite especially the last line. Loved it..
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/30/2018 10:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/30/2018 5:14:00 AM
This is heart-on-your-sleeve poetry at its best, Line. Vulnerability suits you!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/30/2018 7:04:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.
Date: 3/29/2018 7:17:00 PM
Hi Line , wow romantic soft imagery :)) hugs~~~~Niall
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/29/2018 9:43:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Niall.
Date: 3/29/2018 12:23:00 PM
Beautiful imagery Line, well done...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/29/2018 12:32:00 PM
Thank you so much for your visit and comment, Charlie. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/29/2018 11:55:00 AM
Lovely, love filled! :) xomo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/29/2018 12:32:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

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