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Another song highlighting the hope of a better world (A brand new world) This song was written back in December 2019, now music and vocals are completed by Seth Butler so I hope you enjoy and are encouraged by the message!

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Welcome to a brand new world Verse 1 How are you feeling right now? Is there still a yearning in your heart? You're probably like, ten million or more, praying for a brand new start Verse 2 What happened to the world you imagined? Where justice and peace ruled the day... Is it merely a dream or wishful thinking, a fantasy that leads you astray Chorus Welcome to a brand new world... where evil men cannot be found No reason to fear the nighttime, a place where you feel safe and sound Welcome to a brand new world! This is not just a dream...it's reality, joy in the heart of each boy and girl, Welcome to a brand new world! Verse 3 God has shown us how to love So why is true peace elusive? Monsters and imposters hide who they are, they send out doves with a Judas kiss Verse 4 It's been about two thousand years now Praying for God's kingdom to come Now's not the time to lose patience or faith, it's time for God's will to be done Chorus Welcome to a brand new world... where evil men cannot be found No reason to fear the nighttime, a place where you feel safe and sound Welcome to a brand new world! This is not just a dream...it's reality, joy in the heart of each boy and girl, Welcome to a brand new world! Welcome to a brand new world! Welcome to a brand new world! Welcome to a brand new world! repeat and fade John Derek Hamilton December 13,2019 Re-posted with music and vocals September 2,2020

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Date: 11/4/2020 11:41:00 PM
John, I am glad that the first thing I did after coming back to PS was listening to your song. This is such a soulful one! It instantly gives a soothing rhythm with that music and you've penned it so beautifully. I am really enchanted by this one my friend :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/5/2020 9:30:00 AM
Thanks Aditi glad you're back you were sorely missed, I know my new contest could use some of your brilliance!
Date: 10/28/2020 10:49:00 AM
John I’ve just listened to the song, both song and words absolutely beautiful, I do hope this gets put out there, it needs to be heard. Well done, Belle
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Date: 10/28/2020 7:35:00 PM
Hey Belle thanks for the kind visit and generous words, I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: 10/15/2020 5:46:00 PM
Hey brother! Back again! I shared your song with my wife and she loves it too! I wish you success in your endeavor to share your music with the music department in New York. I've been aiming to send one of my lyrics to them too, but never could find an address so I could send them my written lyrics. If you happen to have an address associated with the music department in New York then please forward it to me. lawrence_ingle@yahoo.com Thanks
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/16/2020 8:43:00 AM
Hey Lawrence, nice to see you today, I spoke with another brother who does music, and submits it to HQ's he told me that we can't submit any song we need to be approved and write according to GB request, so I've filled out my application but no requests yet. Take care Jah bless!
Date: 10/12/2020 7:46:00 PM
Such a beautiful song! Excellent piano and singing! Thanks for sharing! It puts me in mind of some of the great songs that our organization uses on their videos at the jw headquarters in New York. Keep up the good work!
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Lawrence Ingle
Date: 10/14/2020 8:48:00 PM
Nice to meet you too. No I'm not really new here, but I haven't been on here for quite awhile, I've been busy publishing my illustrated children's short story rhyme books on KDP. It's great to know you and others are in the truth. Yes, your song has great appeal and I will be playing it again. I have one on CD called "Dearest Heavenly Father" that I sent to Nashville at Paramount Group Inc. and had it recorded. If you would like to record it for me I would pay you to do it in a different melody than the country melody it's been done in. I can email it to you in your email. The words are here in my online poems gallery. lawrence_ingle@yahoo.com
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Date: 10/13/2020 7:13:00 AM
Hey Lawrence nice to meet you my brother, I think we're 5or6 JW's on the site are you new to the soup? I've volunteered to write songs for HQ but no response yet. I'm so glad you liked it, it seems to appeal to everyone so far!
Date: 10/5/2020 2:26:00 PM
John, I can almost sense a video for this as well as thinking it fits great into a gospel, uplifting style of music. I’m not sure how to explain it but for me it kind of starts out sounding melancholy but builds into something more. For me, that is what makes it work so well. Well done!
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Date: 10/6/2020 9:03:00 AM
Thanks M.P I'm glad you came by and left a great comment, you got me thinking about a video now, let's see what I can come up with!
Date: 9/26/2020 2:11:00 PM
Awesome song, John! it is very comforting. Peace, Angie
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Date: 9/26/2020 4:35:00 PM
Thanks Angela nice to have you visit my page, I think your first time, welcome to my page, and thanks for your kind comment!
Date: 9/10/2020 4:19:00 PM
Such an uplifting and hopeful song beautifully sung, John:-) This is exactly the type of song the world needs right now. You're just as exceptional a poet as you are a songwriter! I really loved it. Heartiest congratulations on the POTD recognition!
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Date: 9/10/2020 5:33:00 PM
Thanks Edward so kind of you to drop in with your congrats, thanks for your support!
Date: 9/10/2020 8:07:00 AM
John, this is absolutely beautiful... i am sorry it took me so long to make an appearance...i love this! Your words are so hopeful and the music goes great with them! hugs
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Date: 9/10/2020 9:04:00 AM
Thanks Sandy no worries just glad you were able to come by, so glad you enjoyed it, I thought you would. Take care JD
Date: 9/8/2020 6:38:00 PM
John that is amazing. We are on the fence at this very moment. I know so many people who know in their hearts this truth, yet I think the problem lays in everyone seeing themselves as separate and what can one person do. Keep shouting your truth and I will do the same and eventually people will find their truth and join us. It's the only outcome I see because the other side of the fence is unthinkable.
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Date: 9/8/2020 6:50:00 PM
Thanks Heather I'm glad you were able to come by and enjoyed the song, also glad you look forward to this brand new world, it's time for God's will to be done!
Date: 9/6/2020 4:47:00 PM
WoW! I apologize for being late. But Mister John Hamilton you are such a good song writer. My prayer for “you” is to go beyond” our” soup family and go to the radio.You are gifted and talented and your messages is for “us “ all. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day.It was “so” well deserved. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/7/2020 10:29:00 AM
Thanks Alexis I do have 2 songs that are being promoted for radio, the problem is finding a "star who will launch the record so far no success, but thanks for your encouraging visit and enthusiastic response to the song!
Date: 9/5/2020 11:27:00 PM
I love this beautiful inspiring song John. Congratulations on your much deserved POTD honors! I am Faving this gem! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 9/6/2020 6:52:00 AM
Thanks Connie I'm glad you came by today and enjoyed this one enough to fave it, I am thankful for your kind visit!
Date: 9/4/2020 8:28:00 PM
Wonderful John. It is certainly motivation for writing the sonnet. Thank you. It is a beautiful song of love, hope and vision for a brighter day.
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Date: 9/5/2020 6:33:00 AM
Thanks Janis, that's what gave me the idea for the contest, look forward to your entry!
Date: 9/4/2020 3:11:00 PM
Truly an exceptional piece, a beautiful song of divine love, hope and promise my friend. Huge congratulations on this marvelous song being deservedly chosen as POTD! A fav, a great pleasure to have read ..
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Date: 9/5/2020 6:32:00 AM
Thanks for your kind visit and words Robert, I am especially grateful for the fave, thanks again!
Date: 9/4/2020 2:43:00 PM
Beautiful song. Congrats on your POTD! xoxox
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Date: 9/5/2020 6:32:00 AM
Thanks Jeanne!
Date: 9/4/2020 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations on potd!
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Date: 9/4/2020 5:54:00 AM
Thanks Mark
Date: 9/3/2020 8:57:00 PM
ohh, this song pulls me right into that space of joy with remarkable lyrics speaking to me... so divine, john!...congrats on your POTD award,,huggs..
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Date: 9/4/2020 5:54:00 AM
Thanks Nette for your kind words and generous comment!
Date: 9/3/2020 5:34:00 PM
Wow! This is truly beautiful and amazing. What a great work of art that you have created. I'll bet God is smiling down on you right now. Congrats on your well deserved honor of POTD!!!
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/3/2020 7:23:00 PM
Thanks Mark for your enthusiastic and generous comment, I do believe you are right, all for HIS glory!
Date: 9/3/2020 2:42:00 PM
Even those busy moments surround me, being here is a blessing, in so many ways. Finding this beautiful song shining brightly, as Poem of the Day- makes my heart smile. Congratulations John. I will listen to this again, when I am home and settled. :) Brandy
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/3/2020 5:25:00 PM
Thanks Brandy I'm so glad you liked it enough for 3 comments, I think that's a record! Glad you enjoyed it so much, have a great evening!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/3/2020 4:26:00 PM
I am listening right now. So beautiful.
Date: 9/3/2020 2:23:00 PM
John, congratulations on receiving POTD with this amazing write, so filled with hope very nice and a FAV for me _Constance
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/3/2020 5:23:00 PM
Thanks Constance I was sure you would like it, it has a real lullaby feel to it, that was intentional, so kind your visit an your fave is very much appreciated!
Date: 9/3/2020 12:28:00 PM
Hi John Highly Creatve.. Enjoy The Special Honors! Panagiota xxx
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Date: 9/3/2020 1:27:00 PM
Hi Pangie thanks for your kind visit and support!
Date: 9/3/2020 11:22:00 AM
JD, congratulations on your POTD. This lyric has such a lovely flow with a strong hook - a new world with arms open to all. I especially like the last two lines of the third verse. Sending you prayers and blessings! soup mail.
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Date: 9/3/2020 1:26:00 PM
Hi Sam Thanks for your kind visit and words of support, yes those two lines are my favourite as well, kind of summarizes much of this hypocritical world, unless there is change many will not make it!
Date: 9/3/2020 10:42:00 AM
JD, back to offer heartfelt congratulations for your POTD honor. I should have mentioned in my previous comment what a fine team you and Seth make. I hope you continue to make beautiful music with such uplifting messages. ~ John
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Date: 9/3/2020 1:23:00 PM
Thanks John I know he would be happy to continue so let's see what else we can come up with. I only have a few songs in this vein, but I'm sure he'll do well in any genre. Thanks for your return visit and congrats
Date: 9/3/2020 9:53:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on POTD! Outstanding in every regard! Chantelle hugs xx
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Date: 9/3/2020 1:23:00 PM
Thanks again Chantelle
Date: 9/3/2020 9:18:00 AM
What a joyous song of hope and renewal, John, many congratulations on your fine POTD!
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Date: 9/3/2020 9:35:00 AM
Thanks Michelle, I'm glad you came by today and POTD was a nice surprise, thanks for your support!
Date: 9/3/2020 8:13:00 AM
You have a beautiful voice John! A beautiful tenor voice singing a beautiful song! Congrats on POTD! ~Lili
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Date: 9/3/2020 9:34:00 AM
Thanks Lilian but it's not me singing, as I mentioned in the note, he's a great composer named Seth Butler, but I thank you for the kind visit and congrats!
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