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I’ve no knack for hasty hesitance In truth, I positively press- Do you realize how aligned the planets are? How the stars—they shine brighter, Yes, I know it to be so! Why do you think my pupils enlarge at the sight of you? Can it be that when I look into your eyes, That I know, I know it to be so! That the planets have aligned long ago And they welcomed Pluto into their family again Kiss me, hold me tight! Don’t let the moon-dust frighten you… I carry them on my back, you see The remnants of the guardian’s tears They dispel my hallowed hesitancy You orbit around me A wasp, tempted by sweet, supple bloom And my shady colors have beckoned all but one If it is your sting I will receive, Then give it all, Sun! For many a time have I been welcomed to spheres no longer categorized as the norm Still I find the farther I go, the warmer I become Pluto, take your eyes out of dreamland Kiss me, hold me tight! Be my moon shining in your dim-admired light Posh are your assumptions, oh privileged planet Welcomed to your family, I took mystery for granted And pressed hard on my hesitancy to accept Into pupil-filled eyes that have long since…. Wept

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/5/2016 1:08:00 AM
You really are very interesting when you do your celestial musings, Laura! With several layers of thoughts, bouncing back between eyes and planets. You find empathy into the most unusual, and not so talked about, things (even more fitting, now, since they just recently found a heart-shaped mark on Pluto!) ... "Posh are your assumptions, oh privileged planet" ... I do wonder where you are in all of this ... are you one of the planets? Though intrigued by your style, it is also quite enigmatic.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/5/2016 3:42:00 AM
I once had an outline of this piece in regards to who was saying what - it was kind of in play form, specific dialogue to dialogue, but I am not sure what happened to the document. I believe I had sent it to someone who was curious about it at one point.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/5/2016 3:36:00 AM
I definitely understand. This one was all over the place! ^-^ The answer is yes, well...other planets pipe in this piece as well as the sun- but mostly in Pluto's point of view. Pluto's always been my favorite. :) ~Laura
Date: 10/5/2014 12:54:00 AM
Pluto, a rock of marginalized romance, planet of secret love dust, oh pupils round magic dark, do the stars envy your silent spark...there is a real sexy sadness in your ending line Laura. You are so beautiful and bizarre...J.A.B.
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Date: 10/4/2014 12:06:00 PM
this was for me a very powerfully penned piece love how you drew in this excellent
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Date: 10/2/2014 7:03:00 PM
I am amazed no one has commented, you have a unique voice and I must say I like it. This has a mystical feel to it. I have an appreciation for originality and this certainly qualifies.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/2/2014 8:28:00 PM
Your comment is worth a thousand. Thanks. Heard news that Pluto was a planet again - I thought it would be interesting to try and personify Pluto compared to the other planets and the vastness of space..and how sometimes, we can be left out in our own little voids, our own little spheres.. ~Laura

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