Brandy Nicole Poet Alliteration

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an echo cannot be captured

    ( because the vibrating sound will softly emerge )

as the melody within begins to build,

         waves become wild 

 

and while each breath continues to bounce

       between heaven and earth -

  

        

there’s a longing to be completely covered 

                   in a whirlwind of wet wonder

        and drown in desire

       

    -  to be

beyond breathless

             and embrace every

     

          weightless wave

 

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   a soft passionate scribble 

~ drifting in dewy moments ~ 

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weightless wave

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an echo cannot be captured
    ( because the vibrating sound will softly emerge )
as the melody within begins to build,
         waves become wild 

and while each breath continues to bounce
       between heaven and earth -
  
        
there’s a longing to be completely covered 
                   in a whirlwind of wet wonder
        and drown in desire
       
    -  to be
beyond breathless
             and embrace every
     
           weightless wave

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   a soft passionate scribble 
~ drifting in dewy moments ~ 

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John Gondolf March 29, 2025 at 6:04 PM This beautiful, sensual scribble is even beautiful hearing you recite your words my sweet friend. Warm hugs, John Brandy Nicole March 29, 2025 at 6:21 PM So sweet of you to say, John. I'm smiling and blushing, placing my voice here. I appreciate your kindness and the compliment. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Read October 12, 2024 at 10:58 AM You certainly have a gift for words Brandy. Have a lovely weekend. Xx Brandy Nicole October 14, 2024 at 8:54 PM So kind of you to say, John. My heart is smiling and fluttering, all at the same time. My weekend was nice. I hope you have a wonderful week. :) Hugs, Brandy

Abdullah Alhemaidy September 14, 2024 at 6:51 PM Very neat soft passionate scribble! I love your scribble sweet lovely lady Brandy Brandy Nicole September 14, 2024 at 7:59 PM Those weightless waves within are enough to take the breath away. Thank you Abdullah, for your lovely comment. I'm smiling at your compliment. :) Hugs, Brandy

Susan Ashley September 2, 2024 at 6:42 PM Dearest Brandy, soulful poetess, your soft passionate scribble is breathtaking. Magical, sensual, emotional, sensational.. your sexy, sophisticated use of language leaves me in awe of your expressive poetic style. Nobody creates dewy moments of romance like you my sweet friend. Your golden pen is ever inspiring and ever admired. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan Brandy Nicole September 3, 2024 at 6:16 PM Dear Susan, you always place me and my poetry on a pedestal. Leaving me in complete awe. You are so sweet and so kind. Thank you for this beautiful comment and all your amazing compliments. My heart is smiling and floating, all at the same time. :) I appreciate you saying that my pen is golden and my poetic style is expressive, sophisticated and magical. So true about you too, my sweet friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Len Gasun September 1, 2024 at 6:08 AM Wow! This is so gorgeous my dear poet friend Niclole. I love it and enjoyed. Thanks a lot lot sharing. Blessings to you always and your writings. Happy September! Hugs Brandy Nicole September 1, 2024 at 4:29 PM So kind of you to say, Len. I'm so happy you enjoyed this little scribble of mine. Thank you for your lovely comment. Welcome to September. Many wonderful blessings to you as well. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joseph May August 19, 2024 at 6:32 AM Echoes of emotion as waves of desire reach the shore, Lovely write Brandy, hugs Brandy Nicole August 20, 2024 at 7:10 PM Echos of emotion seem to touch the shore, again and again. Thank you, Joseph. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. :) Hugs, Brandy

Andrea Dietrich August 16, 2024 at 1:48 AM Absolutely beautiful. What gem, Brandy Brandy Nicole August 16, 2024 at 7:31 PM So kind of you to say, Andrea. Thank you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Beryl Edmonds August 13, 2024 at 9:49 AM A beautiful ‘soft passionate scribble’ Brandy ‘drifting in dewy moments’… Beryl Brandy Nicole August 16, 2024 at 7:31 PM Sweet passion indeed, when moments are dewy. Thank you, Beryl. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. :) Hugs, Brandy

Victor Buhagiar August 13, 2024 at 3:49 AM Love knows no bounds. All you need is a mellifluous melody from a distant flute to transport you to bliss. Hugs. Brandy Nicole August 13, 2024 at 2:00 PM The melody of love is beautiful, captivating and intoxicating, all at the same time. Your thoughts bring a smile, Victor. Moments of bliss, indeed. :) Hugs, Brandy

Weston Gregory August 11, 2024 at 8:41 PM This rings true in ways that is apparent to some due to its skirting the realms of dreams and visions, and true to form elist a sense longing. Yearning are sate and appreciate. Brandy Nicole August 13, 2024 at 11:34 AM Dear Weston, in dreams, weightless moments can leave you breathless. In reality, the sensation is sensational and so satisfying. Thank you for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Brandy

Valsa George August 8, 2024 at 11:10 PM In the sweep of emotions, you whirl and spin and its vibrations spread into our minds too and a wave of delight builds up inside. The image you have chosen is so apt for your poem and suggests someone riding / floating over a weightless wave! Simply lovely, dear Brandy! Brandy Nicole August 10, 2024 at 7:11 PM Dear Valsa, you always leave me in awe with your detailed comments. So beautiful and mesmerizing, all at the same time. Within, there's floating and riding of those waves, indeed. An amazing moment to embrace. I appreciate you and your thoughts, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Daniel Henry Rodgers August 5, 2024 at 6:14 AM Dear Brandy, Oh, what a wonderful expression of a deep longing for a complete and overwhelming emotional experience. After reading your poem I could just feel the emotional desire to be engulfed in a powerful, consuming sensation. A desire transcending the current state of being. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Brandy Nicole August 6, 2024 at 6:59 PM Daniel, when the being embraces those exhilarating emotions, the experience is extremely satisfying; indeed. I appreciate you and your lovely comment, my dear friend. You're always able to feel every emotion and moment within. My heart is smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joe Maverick August 4, 2024 at 1:17 PM This gives me a wibbly wobbly yet Well-come..Moment its light yet Strong as it rolls along.! Brandy Nicole August 4, 2024 at 4:28 PM Thank you for your poetic comment, Joe. Your thoughts bring a smile. My best to you. :) Brandy

I Am Anaya July 31, 2024 at 5:52 PM In a sea of desires and endless breathes, this would make an excellent potd anytime! A natural romantic always a romantic, Brandy, passioned filled scribbles! ~Love blessings, sweet one I'll fave! Brandy Nicole August 1, 2024 at 6:43 PM A weightless moment such as this, definitely deserves to be felt all day. :) So kind of you to say, Anaya. I'm playful, passionate and romantic. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Thank you for placing this in your favorites as well. My best to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paul Callus July 29, 2024 at 2:42 AM I love the clever buildup of this sensuous poem, Brandy. Your suggestive use of words turns soft desire into unbridled passionate moments in which it becomes impossible to not let go, drift and drown. Definitely "beyond breathless"! ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul Brandy Nicole July 30, 2024 at 6:37 PM Dear Paul, your thoughts make my heart flutter and I'm blushing. You're able to feel the soft, yet satisfying moments within. It's truly a breathtaking sensation, indeed. Thank you, my sweet friend. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe. :) Hugs, Brandy

Mike Gentile July 27, 2024 at 11:12 AM I just imagine the heady feeling of total embracement in dewy moments! Brandy, your romanticism is such a pleasure to behold and contemplate! I'm floating!! Happy Saturday xxoo Brandy Nicole July 27, 2024 at 6:49 PM There's intense pleasure, which leaves the being beyond breathless. So, you imagine correctly. :) Thank you Mike, for your lovely comment. Happy Saturday to you. Enjoy your moments floating. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos July 27, 2024 at 10:41 AM What deep thoughts you create in this bouncy wet poem and explain so magically- 'to be beyond breathless and embrace every weightless wave.' you always leave me in awe after reading one of your poems. Such talent a gift. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer. Brandy Nicole July 27, 2024 at 6:37 PM Dear Jennifer, you seem to always bring a smile with all your kind words and compliments. Always placing me and my poetry high on a pedestal. You truly humble me. Thank you for your support. You and your thoughts are greatly appreciated. My best to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Ink Empress July 27, 2024 at 10:12 AM Dear brandy, this is such a sensual poem and flows with such deep desires , and longing. I especially love “ to be beyond breathless and embrace every weightless wave” what an ending! Your alliterations flow in such a seamless manner! Pleasure reading this beautiful poem. Sending you light always Brandy Nicole July 27, 2024 at 6:31 PM Waves that are weightless are sensual and inviting, indeed. Thank you Ink, for sharing your favorite thought within, and for saying the flow is seamless. I appreciate you and your kindness. Always. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Arlo Parker July 22, 2024 at 12:10 PM Drowning in echos of desire... oh, the pictures brought to mind, BL. Passion vibrates thru this piece. :o)) Brandy Nicole July 22, 2024 at 6:57 PM Such a satisfying sensation, indeed. My words are creating images within your mind. I'm blushing. :) Yes, passion makes vibrating waves. Thank you, Arlo. :)

Yann Rolland July 21, 2024 at 5:56 AM so graceful poem, inspiration for me, thanks poet yann Brandy Nicole July 22, 2024 at 7:48 AM Thank you, Yann. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

John Gondolf July 20, 2024 at 1:43 AM The weightless waves will always leave you in a whirlwind of wet wonder. I love your soft and sensual words my sweet friend, it is so you! Hugs, John Brandy Nicole July 20, 2024 at 5:55 PM Those weightless waves have a way of taking the breath away, and dewy moments always linger. Thank you John, for saying these words are me. Yes, they are, and now I'm blushing. :) Hugs, Brandy

Eve Roper July 19, 2024 at 7:07 PM You are such a romantic, every word so meaningful. Brandy Nicole July 20, 2024 at 5:35 PM Smiling at you, Eve. Yes I am, and passionate too. :) You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy

Kim Rodrigues July 19, 2024 at 1:39 PM Speaks of fluidity, passion, sensualness…beautiful and along with pic too! Brandy Nicole July 19, 2024 at 7:24 PM Sweet, sensual passion. Beautiful and breathtaking, in every way. Thank you Kim, for your lovely comment. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paige Hind July 19, 2024 at 1:35 PM Just breathtaking, the flow is immaculate and real, few words say so much <3 Brandy Nicole July 19, 2024 at 7:19 PM You're always so kind, Paige. Embracing the real, as thoughts softly emerge. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Silent One July 19, 2024 at 1:33 PM An echo cannot be captured but can repeat and its sound can remain with you forever.. You say so much in only a few words.. I can see this as POTD tomorrow... Brandy Nicole July 19, 2024 at 7:13 PM Yes, the sound does repeat and it lingers for a long time. I appreciate the compliment, Silent One. Sometimes, less is more. I don't know about that. Thank you for saying so. My heart is smiling. :) Hugs, Brandy