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an echo cannot be captured

( because the vibrating sound will softly emerge )

as the melody within begins to build,

waves become wild

and while each breath continues to bounce

between heaven and earth -

there’s a longing to be completely covered

in a whirlwind of wet wonder

and drown in desire

- to be

beyond breathless

and embrace every

weightless wave

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a soft passionate scribble

~ drifting in dewy moments ~

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an echo cannot be captured
    ( because the vibrating sound will softly emerge )
as the melody within begins to build,
         waves become wild 

and while each breath continues to bounce
       between heaven and earth -
  
        
there’s a longing to be completely covered 
                   in a whirlwind of wet wonder
        and drown in desire
       
    -  to be
beyond breathless
             and embrace every
     
           weightless wave

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   a soft passionate scribble 
~ drifting in dewy moments ~

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John Gondolf

Date: 3/29/2025 6:04:00 PM

This beautiful, sensual scribble is even beautiful hearing you recite your words my sweet friend. Warm hugs, John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/29/2025 6:21:00 PM

So sweet of you to say, John. I'm smiling and blushing, placing my voice here. I appreciate your kindness and the compliment. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Read

Date: 10/12/2024 10:58:00 AM

You certainly have a gift for words Brandy. Have a lovely weekend. Xx

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/14/2024 8:54:00 PM

So kind of you to say, John. My heart is smiling and fluttering, all at the same time. My weekend was nice. I hope you have a wonderful week. :) Hugs, Brandy

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 9/14/2024 6:51:00 PM

Very neat soft passionate scribble! I love your scribble sweet lovely lady Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/14/2024 7:59:00 PM

Those weightless waves within are enough to take the breath away. Thank you Abdullah, for your lovely comment. I'm smiling at your compliment. :) Hugs, Brandy

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/2/2024 6:42:00 PM

Dearest Brandy, soulful poetess, your soft passionate scribble is breathtaking. Magical, sensual, emotional, sensational.. your sexy, sophisticated use of language leaves me in awe of your expressive poetic style. Nobody creates dewy moments of romance like you my sweet friend. Your golden pen is ever inspiring and ever admired. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/3/2024 6:16:00 PM

Dear Susan, you always place me and my poetry on a pedestal. Leaving me in complete awe. You are so sweet and so kind. Thank you for this beautiful comment and all your amazing compliments. My heart is smiling and floating, all at the same time. :) I appreciate you saying that my pen is golden and my poetic style is expressive, sophisticated and magical. So true about you too, my sweet friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Len Gasun

Date: 9/1/2024 6:08:00 AM

Wow! This is so gorgeous my dear poet friend Niclole. I love it and enjoyed. Thanks a lot lot sharing. Blessings to you always and your writings. Happy September! Hugs

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/1/2024 4:29:00 PM

So kind of you to say, Len. I'm so happy you enjoyed this little scribble of mine. Thank you for your lovely comment. Welcome to September. Many wonderful blessings to you as well. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 8/19/2024 6:32:00 AM

Echoes of emotion as waves of desire reach the shore, Lovely write Brandy, hugs

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/20/2024 7:10:00 PM

Echos of emotion seem to touch the shore, again and again. Thank you, Joseph. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. :) Hugs, Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2024 1:48:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful. What gem, Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/16/2024 7:31:00 PM

So kind of you to say, Andrea. Thank you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/13/2024 9:49:00 AM

A beautiful ‘soft passionate scribble’ Brandy ‘drifting in dewy moments’… Beryl

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/16/2024 7:31:00 PM

Sweet passion indeed, when moments are dewy. Thank you, Beryl. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. :) Hugs, Brandy

Tom Woody

Date: 8/13/2024 5:23:00 AM

'ello. Love the new avatar. Your serious side?

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/16/2024 7:26:00 PM

Thank you, Tommy. :)

Tom Woody
Date: 8/16/2024 1:19:00 PM

Such a friendly smile

Tom Woody
Date: 8/13/2024 2:34:00 PM

Ahh love the new one better

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/13/2024 2:16:00 PM

A tender smile becomes a bright smile. : )

Tom Woody
Date: 8/13/2024 12:03:00 PM

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/13/2024 11:41:00 AM

Thank you, Tommy ! No serious side, just a simple pic with a soft side and a tender smile. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/13/2024 3:49:00 AM

Love knows no bounds. All you need is a mellifluous melody from a distant flute to transport you to bliss. Hugs.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/13/2024 2:00:00 PM

The melody of love is beautiful, captivating and intoxicating, all at the same time. Your thoughts bring a smile, Victor. Moments of bliss, indeed. :) Hugs, Brandy

Weston Gregory

Date: 8/11/2024 8:41:00 PM

This rings true in ways that is apparent to some due to its skirting the realms of dreams and visions, and true to form elist a sense longing. Yearning are sate and appreciate.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/13/2024 11:34:00 AM

Dear Weston, in dreams, weightless moments can leave you breathless. In reality, the sensation is sensational and so satisfying. Thank you for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Brandy

Valsa George

Date: 8/8/2024 11:10:00 PM

In the sweep of emotions, you whirl and spin and its vibrations spread into our minds too and a wave of delight builds up inside. The image you have chosen is so apt for your poem and suggests someone riding / floating over a weightless wave! Simply lovely, dear Brandy!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/10/2024 7:11:00 PM

Dear Valsa, you always leave me in awe with your detailed comments. So beautiful and mesmerizing, all at the same time. Within, there's floating and riding of those waves, indeed. An amazing moment to embrace. I appreciate you and your thoughts, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 8/5/2024 6:14:00 AM

Dear Brandy, Oh, what a wonderful expression of a deep longing for a complete and overwhelming emotional experience. After reading your poem I could just feel the emotional desire to be engulfed in a powerful, consuming sensation. A desire transcending the current state of being. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/6/2024 6:59:00 PM

Daniel, when the being embraces those exhilarating emotions, the experience is extremely satisfying; indeed. I appreciate you and your lovely comment, my dear friend. You're always able to feel every emotion and moment within. My heart is smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/4/2024 1:17:00 PM

This gives me a wibbly wobbly yet Well-come..Moment its light yet Strong as it rolls along.!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/4/2024 4:28:00 PM

Thank you for your poetic comment, Joe. Your thoughts bring a smile. My best to you. :) Brandy

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/31/2024 5:52:00 PM

In a sea of desires and endless breathes, this would make an excellent potd anytime! A natural romantic always a romantic, Brandy, passioned filled scribbles! ~Love blessings, sweet one I'll fave!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/1/2024 6:43:00 PM

A weightless moment such as this, definitely deserves to be felt all day. :) So kind of you to say, Anaya. I'm playful, passionate and romantic. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Thank you for placing this in your favorites as well. My best to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paul Callus

Date: 7/29/2024 2:42:00 AM

I love the clever buildup of this sensuous poem, Brandy. Your suggestive use of words turns soft desire into unbridled passionate moments in which it becomes impossible to not let go, drift and drown. Definitely "beyond breathless"! ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/30/2024 6:37:00 PM

Dear Paul, your thoughts make my heart flutter and I'm blushing. You're able to feel the soft, yet satisfying moments within. It's truly a breathtaking sensation, indeed. Thank you, my sweet friend. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe. :) Hugs, Brandy

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/27/2024 11:12:00 AM

I just imagine the heady feeling of total embracement in dewy moments! Brandy, your romanticism is such a pleasure to behold and contemplate! I'm floating!! Happy Saturday xxoo

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/27/2024 6:49:00 PM

There's intense pleasure, which leaves the being beyond breathless. So, you imagine correctly. :) Thank you Mike, for your lovely comment. Happy Saturday to you. Enjoy your moments floating. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/27/2024 10:41:00 AM

What deep thoughts you create in this bouncy wet poem and explain so magically- 'to be beyond breathless and embrace every weightless wave.' you always leave me in awe after reading one of your poems. Such talent a gift. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/27/2024 6:37:00 PM

Dear Jennifer, you seem to always bring a smile with all your kind words and compliments. Always placing me and my poetry high on a pedestal. You truly humble me. Thank you for your support. You and your thoughts are greatly appreciated. My best to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Ink Empress

Date: 7/27/2024 10:12:00 AM

Dear brandy, this is such a sensual poem and flows with such deep desires , and longing. I especially love “ to be beyond breathless and embrace every weightless wave” what an ending! Your alliterations flow in such a seamless manner! Pleasure reading this beautiful poem. Sending you light always

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/27/2024 6:31:00 PM

Waves that are weightless are sensual and inviting, indeed. Thank you Ink, for sharing your favorite thought within, and for saying the flow is seamless. I appreciate you and your kindness. Always. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Arlo Parker

Date: 7/22/2024 12:10:00 PM

Drowning in echos of desire... oh, the pictures brought to mind, BL. Passion vibrates thru this piece. :o))

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/22/2024 6:57:00 PM

Such a satisfying sensation, indeed. My words are creating images within your mind. I'm blushing. :) Yes, passion makes vibrating waves. Thank you, Arlo. :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 7/21/2024 5:56:00 AM

so graceful poem, inspiration for me, thanks poet yann

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/22/2024 7:48:00 AM

Thank you, Yann. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 7/20/2024 1:43:00 AM

The weightless waves will always leave you in a whirlwind of wet wonder. I love your soft and sensual words my sweet friend, it is so you! Hugs, John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/20/2024 5:55:00 PM

Those weightless waves have a way of taking the breath away, and dewy moments always linger. Thank you John, for saying these words are me. Yes, they are, and now I'm blushing. :) Hugs, Brandy

Eve Roper

Date: 7/19/2024 7:07:00 PM

You are such a romantic, every word so meaningful.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/20/2024 5:35:00 PM

Smiling at you, Eve. Yes I am, and passionate too. :) You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy

Tom Woody

Date: 7/19/2024 1:44:00 PM

Dewy moments rock! I like the waves metaphor, used it once in one of mine. Sweetly sensuous sexy poetry Brandy Nicole. Maybe Silent One's wish below will come true

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/19/2024 7:28:00 PM

Always drifting in those dewy moments. :) Thank you for noticing this metaphor, Tommy. Yes, this poem has sensual satisfying sensations within. You are so sweet. I just enjoy sharing my words. :)