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Weight of Burdens

Branches break from the weight of the rain Scattered around on the roof and the ground Only proving the weight of burdens on humans can do the same! Heidi Sands 9/2/21

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Joseph May

Date: 9/3/2021 2:58:00 AM

Life's storms can bring burdens, Very nicely penned Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/3/2021 7:34:00 AM

Thank you Joseph. A medium size tree fell in my yard today from the soaked ground and breeze. I hope all is well :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/2/2021 1:38:00 PM

Hi Heidi… Branches break from the weight of the rain, hearts break from the weight of the pain. A lovely Free Verse, Belle

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/2/2021 1:43:00 PM

Yes, Belle. Thank you for your comment :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/2/2021 11:12:00 AM

I like the comparison of the two, Heidi! Something a poet would notice..,

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/2/2021 12:03:00 PM

Thank you Ilene :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/2/2021 8:13:00 AM

Beautifully true! Lovely penning Heidi. :))) xomo

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/2/2021 8:50:00 AM

Thank you Maureen :) I hope all is well !

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/2/2021 6:30:00 AM

WoW! Heidi, Great comparison expressing that heavy burdens can have the same effect.Great job. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/2/2021 6:46:00 AM

Thank you Alexis :)

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 9/2/2021 6:29:00 AM

Oh.. So true...we too collapse at times if overburdened... Well penned verse Heidi... Hugs... ~ Ani

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/2/2021 6:45:00 AM

Thank you Anitha :)