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my grief is vast, death . . . that thief cold- me- a lost leaf ! ______________________ December 5, 2020 Poetry/Than-Bauk/Weeping Disbelief Copyright Protected, ID 12-1309-738-05 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Bauk Than - Than Bauk sponsor, Charles Messina, Judged 02/15/2021 First Place

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Date: 2/17/2021 5:03:00 AM
A wonderful rendering of death! Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2021 7:55:00 AM
Kim, thanks for the visit and the compliment and congratulations _Constance
Date: 2/17/2021 4:39:00 AM
Very nice use of than bauk (variation). Cheers on your first placement.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2021 7:56:00 AM
Reason, thanks for the congratulations and compliment _Constance
Date: 2/17/2021 12:00:00 AM
A beautiful poem that touches the heart, Constance, congratulations on your winner:)
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Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2021 7:56:00 AM
Jo, thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 2/16/2021 6:24:00 AM
congratulations on your win. Few words with much said. Have a blessed day with your win....................
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Date: 2/16/2021 8:16:00 AM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment _Constance
Date: 2/16/2021 2:25:00 AM
Congrats on this fine winner. Way to go. Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 2/16/2021 8:17:00 AM
Sara, thanks for the congrats and the compliment _Constance
Date: 2/15/2021 9:22:00 PM
Love this, Constance. Congrats on your 1st place win!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/16/2021 8:18:00 AM
Charles, thanks for another great contest and for my great placement and for the compliment and congrats _Constance
Date: 12/5/2020 5:27:00 PM
A tiny gem, Constance!!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/7/2020 1:56:00 PM
Newton, thanks for visiting my poem with the compliment _Constance

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