Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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Weep

 
I touch, the old weathered stone angels softly,
And stones, vine covered and tree shady,
All the names are engraved deep,
Sad sorrow to keep,
Forever.
Weep,
Oh mourner,
For all here that sleep,
Death and time, entwine and creep,
The dead, whispering to me sweetly,
I touch the old weathered stone angels softly.

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October 5, 2015

Poetry/Andaree/Rhyme/Weep
Copyright Protected, ID 15-714-794-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


For the contest, The Andaree Contest II, 
sponsor, Andrea Dietrich

Seventh Place

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Skat A October 21, 2015 at 9:29 PM Broken, Wonderful win.................. SKAT

Sandra Haight October 18, 2015 at 4:43 PM Beautifully sad, Broken Wings. I share your emotions on this when I visit my family members neath their weathered stones...Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison October 17, 2015 at 9:20 PM Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich October 17, 2015 at 8:57 PM Simply gorgeous, Constance. Again, I like the rhyme to be on the stressed syllables. Otherwise, this would have been in the top three. Congrats!

Vincent Flannery October 7, 2015 at 2:47 PM Very nicely written. Sensing the pain, power and of course, His Glory in something so often overlooked !

James Inman October 7, 2015 at 7:38 AM Excellent write, BW. Well written with deep meaning.

CayCay Godwin October 7, 2015 at 12:54 AM Touching and sweet, like a small ray of sun on a slightly rainy day. I enjoyed it very much ... CayCay

Balveen Cheema October 6, 2015 at 12:01 PM Its ridden with pain, Wings! Love, Balveen

Alexis Y. October 6, 2015 at 7:35 AM BW, I enjoyed this well written piece.Great job! Good luck in the contest:-)Alexis 7

Jan Allison October 5, 2015 at 11:36 PM Beautifully penned Broken Wings. I hope this will do well for you in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7

Michael Tor October 5, 2015 at 11:14 PM Very nice Broken Wings. Nice entry for the contest,

Barbara Gorelick October 5, 2015 at 9:43 PM This is lovely, I will add it to my favorites....BG