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I touch, the old weathered stone angels softly, And stones, vine covered and tree shady, All the names are engraved deep, Sad sorrow to keep, Forever. Weep, Oh mourner, For all here that sleep, Death and time, entwine and creep, The dead, whispering to me sweetly, I touch the old weathered stone angels softly. __________________________ October 5, 2015 Poetry/Andaree/Rhyme/Weep Copyright Protected, ID 15-714-794-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, The Andaree Contest II, sponsor, Andrea Dietrich Seventh Place

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Date: 10/21/2015 9:29:00 PM
Broken, Wonderful win.................. SKAT
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Date: 10/18/2015 4:43:00 PM
Beautifully sad, Broken Wings. I share your emotions on this when I visit my family members neath their weathered stones...Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/17/2015 9:20:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/17/2015 8:57:00 PM
Simply gorgeous, Constance. Again, I like the rhyme to be on the stressed syllables. Otherwise, this would have been in the top three. Congrats!
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Date: 10/7/2015 2:47:00 PM
Very nicely written. Sensing the pain, power and of course, His Glory in something so often overlooked !
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Date: 10/7/2015 7:38:00 AM
Excellent write, BW. Well written with deep meaning.
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Date: 10/7/2015 12:54:00 AM
Touching and sweet, like a small ray of sun on a slightly rainy day. I enjoyed it very much ... CayCay
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Date: 10/6/2015 12:01:00 PM
Its ridden with pain, Wings! Love, Balveen
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Date: 10/6/2015 7:35:00 AM
BW, I enjoyed this well written piece.Great job! Good luck in the contest:-)Alexis 7
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Date: 10/5/2015 11:36:00 PM
Beautifully penned Broken Wings. I hope this will do well for you in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Date: 10/5/2015 11:14:00 PM
Very nice Broken Wings. Nice entry for the contest,
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Date: 10/5/2015 9:43:00 PM
This is lovely, I will add it to my favorites....BG
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