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Wedding Night

In my wedding night My bride waits sandalwood smell Girls are curious Collyrium eyes glisten The moths sit on burning lights

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Eve Roper
Date: 1/4/2015 10:22:00 PM
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Rajat, 7, loved your Tanka, blessed my mouth to be taped. Blessings to you my dear friend of happiness, health, wisdom, and wealth
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/4/2015 8:21:00 PM
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Love the last line best.. :)! weeeeeeeeeee.. :)thanks much GBU!
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David Meade
Date: 1/4/2015 2:25:00 PM
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Nicely done my dear friend. The excitement of uniting a family -- 7
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Cupids Arrow
Date: 1/4/2015 1:48:00 PM
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Lovely Rajat...C--->A
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Casarah Nance
Date: 1/4/2015 1:11:00 PM
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I like that -the moths sit on burning lights- what an interesting way to end your tanka, well said!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/4/2015 1:10:00 PM
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-"Girls are curious" :)) - Lovely poem, Rajat - // Anne-Lise :)
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