Weaver's Gate

Not till the loom was silent
And the shuttle ceased to fly
When history unrolled the scroll
And reveals the reason why.
The darkest thread as needful
In the weavers skilful hand
As the cloth of gold and silver
Of an industrious ruin greed had planned.
No amount of corporate education
Could quell our simple brain
No grammar association
Yet unravelled the master’s pain.
They took away our ambition
Off shore was their devious plan
Tried so hard to pick our pockets
Yet our skill could clothe a man.
His call was for cheap labour
Some call it slavery
Now we buy at a thousand per cent
The product of knavery!

 

First eight lines adapted from anon poem, The Weaver, speculation wrote, by a weaver in/from Colne, Lancs England last Century, wrote originally for/in a religious format, 
My version, here. Political.



© Harry J Horsman 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kauffman Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 10:05 AM
Harry, every line is a masterpiece of vivid imagery that supports your exposure of slave labor. There is a profound depth of emotion and a call to action. Congratulations on your win! Blessings on the work of your hands my friend.
Alex Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 5:15 AM
"history unrolled the scroll" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Logan Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 3:36 AM
I'm delighted to see your entry on the marathon's winning list. Congratulations on your placement, and on your ability to expose the debacle of slave wage labor.
Ashley Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 1:25 PM
Dear Harry, your profound pen shines in this poem. "They took away our ambition / Off shore was their devious plan" and "His call was for cheap labour / Some call it slavery" So sad to see this happening over the past decades. A powerful expression, my friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 11:31 AM
Here is an oldie that is really deserving of the Marathon win . WAY TO GO, Harry.
Toney Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 2:54 PM
Harry, your poem is a powerful indictment! Power poetry! Congratulations on your win on Mile 5 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Mile 6 has already started, and guess what? You're currently in 11th position overall! You can find the current standings in my blog post.
Maverick Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 12:36 PM
Hello Harry for the 2nd read I say nothing is new under the sun seems to fit here..' hope you are doing O K today.!
Maverick Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 1:17 AM
I like the way you Present the struggle of life values in this Harry, both that of workers and the owners as they try To rationalise their position..' the story is the same apways Just the country's change..'
Mcdaid Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 9:06 PM
really love how you penned this harry powerful piece
Guzzi Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 2:36 PM
So nice to read your poetry this afternoon, Harry, I think you could even expand this to make it clearer what you are talking about- my guess would be migrant labor? Perhaps a form with repeated lines for force? Light & Love
Sathasivam Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 2:55 AM
Excellent. A good political message. Enjoyed. Tfs
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 9:44 PM
A bold and profound message Harry, written so creatively. It is great reading your work again.
Dietrich Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 4:51 PM
A great political message in our perilous times, Harry. Written so poetically!!
Kendrick Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 12:52 PM
Very strong political work/capitolism work..Now over here they are saying they are going to bring industry back but it will take decades..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Fleming Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 12:15 PM
Excellent piece of prose, Harry!! :) john.
Devnath  Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 11:29 AM
"As the cloth of gold........unrevealed the master's pain"...excellent thought has depicted a reality of today's life. Master of golden pen. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
Lindley Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 8:10 AM
Awesomely brilliant! Message and execution rings so true my friend.. Knavery is the correct judgment, Super 7 on this..
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 7:23 AM
Absouletly bloody brilliant xx
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