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Weaver's Gate

Not till the loom was silent And the shuttle ceased to fly When history unrolled the scroll And reveals the reason why. The darkest thread as needful In the weavers skilful hand As the cloth of gold and silver Of an industrious ruin greed had planned. No amount of corporate education Could quell our simple brain No grammar association Yet unravelled the master’s pain. They took away our ambition Off shore was their devious plan Tried so hard to pick our pockets Yet our skill could clothe a man. His call was for cheap labour Some call it slavery Now we buy at a thousand per cent The product of knavery! First eight lines adapted from anon poem, The Weaver, speculation wrote, by a weaver in/from Colne, Lancs England last Century, wrote originally for/in a religious format, My version, here. Political. © Harry J Horsman 2015

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Date: 7/8/2022 10:05:00 AM
Harry, every line is a masterpiece of vivid imagery that supports your exposure of slave labor. There is a profound depth of emotion and a call to action. Congratulations on your win! Blessings on the work of your hands my friend.
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Date: 7/4/2022 5:15:00 AM
"history unrolled the scroll" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/4/2022 3:36:00 AM
I'm delighted to see your entry on the marathon's winning list. Congratulations on your placement, and on your ability to expose the debacle of slave wage labor.
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Date: 7/3/2022 1:25:00 PM
Dear Harry, your profound pen shines in this poem. "They took away our ambition / Off shore was their devious plan" and "His call was for cheap labour / Some call it slavery" So sad to see this happening over the past decades. A powerful expression, my friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/3/2022 11:31:00 AM
Here is an oldie that is really deserving of the Marathon win . WAY TO GO, Harry.
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Date: 7/3/2022 8:50:00 AM
Harry, the corporate jungle world and Wall Street have created a system in America where its more profitable for shareholders and 401Ks to exploit labor from 3rd world and non-democratic countries (and children). Profit without investing in America will eventually dry up. Well said and well written. Congrats!
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Date: 7/2/2022 2:54:00 PM
Harry, your poem is a powerful indictment! Power poetry! Congratulations on your win on Mile 5 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Mile 6 has already started, and guess what? You're currently in 11th position overall! You can find the current standings in my blog post.
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Date: 10/17/2015 12:36:00 PM
Hello Harry for the 2nd read I say nothing is new under the sun seems to fit here..' hope you are doing O K today.!
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Date: 3/12/2015 1:17:00 AM
I like the way you Present the struggle of life values in this Harry, both that of workers and the owners as they try To rationalise their position..' the story is the same apways Just the country's change..'
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Date: 1/10/2015 9:06:00 PM
really love how you penned this harry powerful piece
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Date: 1/8/2015 2:36:00 PM
So nice to read your poetry this afternoon, Harry, I think you could even expand this to make it clearer what you are talking about- my guess would be migrant labor? Perhaps a form with repeated lines for force? Light & Love
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Date: 1/8/2015 2:55:00 AM
Excellent. A good political message. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 1/7/2015 9:44:00 PM
A bold and profound message Harry, written so creatively. It is great reading your work again.
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Date: 1/7/2015 4:51:00 PM
A great political message in our perilous times, Harry. Written so poetically!!
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Date: 1/7/2015 12:52:00 PM
Very strong political work/capitolism work..Now over here they are saying they are going to bring industry back but it will take decades..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/7/2015 12:15:00 PM
Excellent piece of prose, Harry!! :) john.
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Date: 1/7/2015 11:29:00 AM
"As the cloth of gold........unrevealed the master's pain"...excellent thought has depicted a reality of today's life. Master of golden pen. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 1/7/2015 8:10:00 AM
Awesomely brilliant! Message and execution rings so true my friend.. Knavery is the correct judgment, Super 7 on this..
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Date: 1/7/2015 7:23:00 AM
Absouletly bloody brilliant xx
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