Weave of Life's Fabric

 Sewing machine, long idle, gathered dust
Polished now in the  hallway, my  fond antique
Recalling Grandaunt’s delicate craftwork--
Each pattern of fabric threaded  with zest,
As her hands would bounce around pinpoint needles,
Weaving an array of doilies  rugs   garments
Intently absorbed  in a foot pedal’s rhythm
That her hums  trailed beyond Nam’s bombings :

The war years seemed like only yesterday,
Calming  her through spindles of moon’s quick cycle .
Along  each evening’s gloss, we rollicked   laughed
Exchanging banters like friends… till she crossed over :
Tonight,  I gently pat her own quilt laying on my bedside,
Lining our decades of sweet remembrances…
For a moment, my eyes gazed at stars’ fading wicker,
The candle sputtered, spent, and all was dark.


Viv Wigley’s Contest: One  nine and  sixteen
Written 5/1/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 1:35 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your great win.
George   Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 5:59 PM
Very heartfelt, dear Nette. The tile is so perfect for what you wrote. Very evocative writing. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Lainie
Messina Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 4:06 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Nette, Wonderful story and tribute to your grandaunt...Charlie
Johnson Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 2:42 PM
You did a great job with this. Congratulations. Joyce
Roper Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 11:55 AM
Awe...Nette, I also own a blanket my grandmother made , but sealed and put away..Congratulations on your win,
Allison Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 11:47 AM
Many congratulations on your win in the contest Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
Gentry Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 9:42 AM
Nette this is amazing, a well- written nostalgic tale on the contest. Congratulations on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 7:28 AM
Wonderful tribute of your Grandaunt!
Gauthier Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 5:52 AM
Congrats on you well deserved win, nette.
Cunningham Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 2:47 AM
Lovely imagery Nette. Congratulations. Tom.
Sergi Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 1:22 PM
Hi nette A fond remembrance of war, peace and diligence. I wish you well and thank you very much for your sweet comment
Peranteau Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 8:39 PM
Nette dear poet, this write of yours gave me chills, I lived with my grandmother when I was quite the young lad and many things, especially when I pass by antique shops remind me of her and the love she shared with me...ty
Parker Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 4:56 PM
and woven it is, " tonight, I gently pat her own quilt laying on my bedside, lining our decades of sweet remembrances" what a picture...good luck dear poet
Pandit Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 4:02 PM
Beautifully woven life's fabric..memories of past recalled with fondness..best for a win, nette.
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