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***** A weather forecast : Expect frozen rain, snow squalls. Warning! Please stay home. The angry gray clouds taunts the calm wind's, sneers ~ Please blow! Gusts fiercely ~ GO! The cold, chilly rain changed from rain to clear sleet. propels ice pellets. The clear ice frolics. across the clear window pane. Hurling and twirling With temperature change The ice turned to fluffy snow. Harsh winds bring blizzards. Two-foot-high snow drifts thermometer rises, snow melts. A warm, sunny day The weather forecast: Expect frozen rains, snow squalls. Warning! Please stay home.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/3/2022 8:34:00 AM

What a story/write. Sounds way toooooo cold for me. Yes, stay home where it is warm and dry. Glad spring is here. Hooray!!! Have a blessed day...................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/30/2022 2:26:00 PM

lol these days that is all we do, nice one Deb, God bless you :)

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/2/2022 1:09:00 PM

I agree with Rose, it's either raining or snowing. We were looking for freezing rain tonight. Thanks for your comment Blessings ~ Debra

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/29/2022 4:23:00 AM

Exactly as it has been lately. Aren't we glad we can stay home? I enjoy those two or three days of warmth before the next howling wind appears. I enjoyed reading this one because it seems I am there. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara

Debra L Brown
Date: 1/29/2022 11:31:00 AM

I glad you enjoyed the poem. We just got several inches last night. I guest I'm still living it. Thanks Sara. Blessings ~ Debra

Paul Callus

Date: 1/22/2022 6:39:00 AM

I enjoyed your "weather forecast", Debra. I'm tempted to offer you a job with "Weather Channel" :) Hopefully your chilly days will soon become a thing of the past. Time to play "Aquarius (Let the Sunshine in)". // paul

Debra L Brown
Date: 1/27/2022 3:00:00 PM

Hi Paul, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I had a good time writing it. But I guess I'll just stick to staring out my rear window to predict the weather. I'll leave the actual predicting to the experts. Keep warm ~ Debra

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 1/21/2022 5:16:00 AM

Very good effort in writing a series of Haikus on the weather forecast on winter storm...I enjoyed reading sweet friend...We rarely experience extreme winter here in India...How is the situation there now? Stay safe dear...Best wishes and hugs...~ Ani

Debra L Brown
Date: 1/21/2022 2:07:00 PM

I's a joy to speak with you, Ani, and thank you for your thoughtful thoughts. Today's temperature is 19 degrees. People are still working their way out of the ice and snow. More snow is expected on Sunday, according to the forecast. Blessings & Hugs ~ Debra

Valsa George

Date: 1/19/2022 8:11:00 PM

This is indeed a marvelous attempt ! Haiku's galore and all of them so beautiful, clearly forecasting the winter weather... Great job Debra !

Debra L Brown
Date: 1/20/2022 9:38:00 PM

Thank you, Valsa, for your words of encouragement. Blessings & Debra

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/18/2022 7:46:00 PM

The weather lady’s broadcast and then some…powerful…chills me to the bone.

Debra L Brown
Date: 1/20/2022 9:42:00 PM

Thanks Kim, I enjoyed your comment. It's 17 degrees here. Were still digging out from the snow storm. Blessings

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/18/2022 12:07:00 PM

Wonderful. Love it. God bless you, Love, Gina

Debra L Brown
Date: 1/18/2022 2:04:00 PM

Thanks for the words of encouragement. Blessings & Hugs ~ Debra

Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/18/2022 10:31:00 AM

"Please stay home" is like saying, "Please wear your facemask correctly", but enjoyed your poem! Aloha!

Debra L Brown
Date: 1/18/2022 2:09:00 PM

It's always a joy to see you. Rico, Congratulations on being awarded POTD. Thank you for your encouraging remarks. Blessings ~ Debra

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/18/2022 8:51:00 AM

Great string of haiku Debra, no sign of snow here apart from a few frosts. Tom

Debra L Brown
Date: 1/18/2022 2:17:00 PM

Hello there, Tom. I'm delighted to speak with you. We're still digging out from the snowstorm, and it's 28 degrees with an overcast. We got about 13 inches of snow, and there was a lot of snow drifting due to the strong wind. Thank you for your words of encouragement.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/18/2022 12:25:00 AM

That's where I've been this whole week. Does one die from a sore throat? Hugs,

Debra L Brown
Date: 1/18/2022 5:22:00 AM

Hello! Victor, Prayers for a quick recovery. Thanks for your comment. Blessings & Hugs~ Debra

Bill Baker

Date: 1/17/2022 11:08:00 PM

A Haiku masterpiece, Debra. Excellent poetry! Write On! my friend. Hugs, Bill

Debra L Brown
Date: 1/18/2022 5:18:00 AM

Thanks Bill I'm humbled by your comment. Congrates on your Sonnet winning POTD. Outstanding write. Blessings~ Debra

Anil Deo

Date: 1/17/2022 10:44:00 PM

Good work for bad weather? We had an early December hailstorm, & cars still go around with back windshields pockmarked with machine gun fire. I'd never seen baseball size hail in USA (or anywhere else!) Shalom. PTL

Debra L Brown
Date: 1/18/2022 5:15:00 AM

Thanks for your comment. Before it turned to snow, we had ice pellets falling. It resulted in poor driving conditions.We'll be digging out for a while. Nice to talk to Blessings and prayers always ~ Debra

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/17/2022 10:23:00 PM

Wow, Debra, sat here in my room Perth western Australia, reading these gems of yours, its forecast here, for the next 8 days, around 40 degrees 104F in your language. At least it was a nice chilly read.

Debra L Brown
Date: 1/18/2022 5:08:00 AM

Thank you very much for your comment. During the storm I wrote this poem. It's been in the low 30's. I have snow drifts in my back yard, will be digging out for sometime. I've been unable to post because the internet has been on and off. Keep warm, Blessings ~ Debra

Judy Ball

Date: 1/17/2022 7:41:00 PM

WoW! Those warnings are no stranger to me. Anybody who doesn't stay is is foolish. Good write with exceptional imagery and emotion. God Bless, JB

Debra L Brown
Date: 1/18/2022 4:37:00 AM

While we were in the midst of the storm, I wrote this. I could sit and stare at the dark clouds outside my window. "Calm before the storm," as the phrase goes. Thank you for your comment. Blessings ~ Debra

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/17/2022 5:40:00 PM

I certainly will stay in if that's coming. Well penned.

Debra L Brown
Date: 1/18/2022 4:29:00 AM

This poem was written in the midst of a snowstorm. Throughout the day, storm warnings were issued. Thank you for your comment. Blessings ~ Debra