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You saw the moon But I was not the light You came to nature But I was not eternal You flew the dove of freedom But I was in the chain of life My smiling traveled your sight But your eyes seized the day There were you as the statue of verse Where my love was cracked mars © Mahtab Bangalee Chattogram 09/03/2023

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Date: 3/13/2023 5:48:00 AM
Well-crafted poem with strong metaphors. Much appreciate your comment on my page.
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Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 3/13/2023 11:05:00 PM
Thank you very much dear poet for your kind words

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