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We Walk On Air

Romantic evening arrived with reason Reveling outdoors frolicking in fun Enchanting lovers in blooming season As you entered with glory of the sun Sitting on sandy beach holding your hand Blue moon I witnessed romancing your eyes Shining intently glimmering your sand Inviting my vibes to reach for the prize You found the courage to conquer the tides Charming blue waters fervently divine Lifting my emotions where passion rides Revealing glimpses of sensual sign Courting amorous winds we walk on air With avid glare, beaming romantic flare May 12, 2018 Placed 4th in Summer love sonnet contest by John Hamilton Ten syllables per line

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Valsa George

Date: 2/28/2022 6:27:00 AM

In such a salubrious ambiance, the walk with the beloved can be nothing short of floating in the air ! Powerfully sensual and amorously romantic !

Angela Crabtree

Date: 1/26/2021 2:35:00 PM

A beautiful poem, Vijay. Love does make us feel that we're walking on air. Hope you have a great night :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/6/2018 4:59:00 PM

Hi Vijay, much belated congratulations on your win with this wonderful sonnet. Your words flow so gently, painting such a wonderful canvas . Love's scene is alive with beauty and your gentle words sing into the heart. Such a beautiful sonnet my friend. This one has to be a fave. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/2/2018 7:57:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Vijay.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/19/2018 9:53:00 AM

Big Congrats to you on your win, Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2018 11:53:00 AM

Thank you Andrea.

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/19/2018 5:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful summer sonnet!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2018 7:07:00 AM

Thank you Susan.

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/18/2018 9:58:00 PM

Vijay, your lovely sonnet expresses hot summer love with romantic and enchanting imagery. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Warmest wishes ~Susan

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2018 7:06:00 AM

Thank you Susan.

John Hamilton

Date: 5/18/2018 1:30:00 PM

Beautiful summer sonnet Vijay, congrats on a fine placement!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2018 4:25:00 PM

Thank you John.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/18/2018 7:08:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Vijay :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2018 4:25:00 PM

Thank you Heidi.

Elaine George

Date: 5/17/2018 7:42:00 PM

I knew this would be on the winner's list, Vijay. Many congrats. Elaine

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2018 4:25:00 PM

Thank you Elaine.

Elaine George

Date: 5/15/2018 1:22:00 PM

I can't believe it...we wrote a sonnet so similar on this subject. Just goes to proof...great minds think a like.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/15/2018 1:58:00 PM

So glad to read your comments Elaine..many thanks for the compliments. I know, though, your mind works on a much higher wavelength.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/13/2018 4:20:00 PM

I love the imagery and romantic content, Vijay. I can imagine two people lost in one another...walking on air!! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/13/2018 4:31:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your comments...many thanks Paul.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2018 3:46:00 PM

Sweet, romantic and pretty imagery , Vijay. Good luck in this contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/13/2018 4:30:00 PM

Thank you Andrea...appreciate the kind feedback.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/13/2018 12:23:00 PM

- I enjoy reading your beautiful and romantic sonnet, Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/13/2018 3:37:00 PM

Appreciate your comments as always, many thanks Anne-Lise.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/13/2018 12:14:00 PM

you warm my heart with this marvelous poem, vijay!..love is in the air!.. huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/13/2018 12:19:00 PM

Many thanks nette..always appreciate your kind words.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/13/2018 9:25:00 AM

Vijay, my friend, this outstanding piece is indeed another manifestation of your extraordinary talent as a premier romantic poet! It exudes the magic of summer love! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/13/2018 12:19:00 PM

Thank you Pandita--appreciate your kind feedback my friend.