Vijay Pandit Poet Sonnet

We Walk On Air

Romantic evening arrived with reason
Reveling outdoors frolicking in fun
Enchanting lovers in blooming season
As you entered with glory of the sun

Sitting on sandy beach holding your hand
Blue moon I witnessed romancing your eyes
Shining intently glimmering your sand
Inviting my vibes to reach for the prize

You found the courage to conquer the tides
Charming blue waters fervently divine
Lifting my emotions where passion rides
Revealing glimpses of sensual sign

Courting amorous winds we walk on air
With avid glare, beaming romantic flare

May 12, 2018
Placed 4th in Summer love sonnet contest by John Hamilton
Ten syllables per line

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Valsa George February 28, 2022 at 6:27 AM In such a salubrious ambiance, the walk with the beloved can be nothing short of floating in the air ! Powerfully sensual and amorously romantic !

Angela Crabtree January 26, 2021 at 2:35 PM A beautiful poem, Vijay. Love does make us feel that we're walking on air. Hope you have a great night :)

Vladislav Raven November 6, 2018 at 4:59 PM Hi Vijay, much belated congratulations on your win with this wonderful sonnet. Your words flow so gently, painting such a wonderful canvas . Love's scene is alive with beauty and your gentle words sing into the heart. Such a beautiful sonnet my friend. This one has to be a fave. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.

Line Gauthier June 2, 2018 at 7:57 PM Congrats on your win, Vijay.

Andrea Dietrich May 19, 2018 at 9:53 AM Big Congrats to you on your win, Vijay Vijay Pandit May 19, 2018 at 11:53 AM Thank you Andrea.

Susan Gentry May 19, 2018 at 5:52 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful summer sonnet! Vijay Pandit May 19, 2018 at 7:07 AM Thank you Susan.

Susan Ashley May 18, 2018 at 9:58 PM Vijay, your lovely sonnet expresses hot summer love with romantic and enchanting imagery. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Warmest wishes ~Susan Vijay Pandit May 19, 2018 at 7:06 AM Thank you Susan.

John Hamilton May 18, 2018 at 1:30 PM Beautiful summer sonnet Vijay, congrats on a fine placement! Vijay Pandit May 18, 2018 at 4:25 PM Thank you John.

Heidi Sands May 18, 2018 at 7:08 AM Congratulations for your win Vijay :) Vijay Pandit May 18, 2018 at 4:25 PM Thank you Heidi.

Elaine George May 17, 2018 at 7:42 PM I knew this would be on the winner's list, Vijay. Many congrats. Elaine Vijay Pandit May 18, 2018 at 4:25 PM Thank you Elaine.

Elaine George May 15, 2018 at 1:22 PM I can't believe it...we wrote a sonnet so similar on this subject. Just goes to proof...great minds think a like. Vijay Pandit May 15, 2018 at 1:58 PM So glad to read your comments Elaine..many thanks for the compliments. I know, though, your mind works on a much higher wavelength.

Paul Callus May 13, 2018 at 4:20 PM I love the imagery and romantic content, Vijay. I can imagine two people lost in one another...walking on air!! Regards // paul Vijay Pandit May 13, 2018 at 4:31 PM Enjoyed reading your comments...many thanks Paul.

Andrea Dietrich May 13, 2018 at 3:46 PM Sweet, romantic and pretty imagery , Vijay. Good luck in this contest. Vijay Pandit May 13, 2018 at 4:30 PM Thank you Andrea...appreciate the kind feedback.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 13, 2018 at 12:23 PM - I enjoy reading your beautiful and romantic sonnet, Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit May 13, 2018 at 3:37 PM Appreciate your comments as always, many thanks Anne-Lise.

Nette Onclaud May 13, 2018 at 12:14 PM you warm my heart with this marvelous poem, vijay!..love is in the air!.. huggs Vijay Pandit May 13, 2018 at 12:19 PM Many thanks nette..always appreciate your kind words.

Pandita Sietesantos May 13, 2018 at 9:25 AM Vijay, my friend, this outstanding piece is indeed another manifestation of your extraordinary talent as a premier romantic poet! It exudes the magic of summer love! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita Vijay Pandit May 13, 2018 at 12:19 PM Thank you Pandita--appreciate your kind feedback my friend.

Roy Pett May 13, 2018 at 5:24 AM Beautifully written sonnet Vijay, emotional and romantic, a joy to read my friend. :)) Vijay Pandit May 13, 2018 at 7:31 AM Always happy to read your kind words--many thanks Roy.

Eve Roper May 12, 2018 at 9:45 PM Nicely done, Vijay, a wonderful romantic and perfect sonnet.. good luck in the contest. Vijay Pandit May 13, 2018 at 7:31 AM Thank you Eve..enjoyed reading your feedback.

Demetrios Trifiatis May 12, 2018 at 1:23 PM A romantic sonnet where the whole nature participates to help reach a climatic conclusion of love ! Marvelously done my friend, Vijay! Vijay Pandit May 12, 2018 at 3:48 PM Glad to read your comments my friend..many thanks.

Winged Warrior May 12, 2018 at 7:31 AM A beautiful sonnet my friend...romantic in every aspect...a win for best...love and light...^WW^ Vijay Pandit May 12, 2018 at 3:47 PM Appreciate your feedback my friend--thank you WW.

Arturo Michael May 12, 2018 at 7:31 AM Movie scenes... well depicted...lots of love here...I guess, walking on air...All the best Vijay... Vijay Pandit May 12, 2018 at 3:47 PM Appreciate your feedback Arturo..many thanks.

Heidi Sands May 12, 2018 at 7:08 AM A beautiful summer love sonnet. Walk on air! I love it. Good luck in the contest Vijay :) Vijay Pandit May 12, 2018 at 3:46 PM Thank you Heidi..happy to read your comments.