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We Walk On Air

Romantic evening arrived with reason
Reveling outdoors frolicking in fun
Enchanting lovers in blooming season
As you entered with glory of the sun

Sitting on sandy beach holding your hand
Blue moon I witnessed romancing your eyes
Shining intently glimmering your sand
Inviting my vibes to reach for the prize

You found the courage to conquer the tides
Charming blue waters fervently divine
Lifting my emotions where passion rides
Revealing glimpses of sensual sign

Courting amorous winds we walk on air
With avid glare, beaming romantic flare

May 12, 2018
Placed 4th in Summer love sonnet contest by John Hamilton
Ten syllables per line

Copyright © Vijay Pandit | Year Posted 2018

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Valsa George Date: 2/28/2022 6:27:00 AM In such a salubrious ambiance, the walk with the beloved can be nothing short of floating in the air ! Powerfully sensual and amorously romantic ! Login to Reply

Angela Crabtree Date: 1/26/2021 2:35:00 PM A beautiful poem, Vijay. Love does make us feel that we're walking on air. Hope you have a great night :) Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 11/6/2018 4:59:00 PM Hi Vijay, much belated congratulations on your win with this wonderful sonnet. Your words flow so gently, painting such a wonderful canvas . Love's scene is alive with beauty and your gentle words sing into the heart. Such a beautiful sonnet my friend. This one has to be a fave. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike. Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 6/2/2018 7:57:00 PM Congrats on your win, Vijay. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/19/2018 9:53:00 AM Big Congrats to you on your win, Vijay Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/19/2018 11:53:00 AM Thank you Andrea.

Susan Gentry Date: 5/19/2018 5:52:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful summer sonnet! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/19/2018 7:07:00 AM Thank you Susan.

Susan Ashley Date: 5/18/2018 9:58:00 PM Vijay, your lovely sonnet expresses hot summer love with romantic and enchanting imagery. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Warmest wishes ~Susan Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/19/2018 7:06:00 AM Thank you Susan.

John Hamilton Date: 5/18/2018 1:30:00 PM Beautiful summer sonnet Vijay, congrats on a fine placement! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/18/2018 4:25:00 PM Thank you John.

Heidi Sands Date: 5/18/2018 7:08:00 AM Congratulations for your win Vijay :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/18/2018 4:25:00 PM Thank you Heidi.

Elaine George Date: 5/17/2018 7:42:00 PM I knew this would be on the winner's list, Vijay. Many congrats. Elaine Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/18/2018 4:25:00 PM Thank you Elaine.

Elaine George Date: 5/15/2018 1:22:00 PM I can't believe it...we wrote a sonnet so similar on this subject. Just goes to proof...great minds think a like. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/15/2018 1:58:00 PM So glad to read your comments Elaine..many thanks for the compliments. I know, though, your mind works on a much higher wavelength.

Paul Callus Date: 5/13/2018 4:20:00 PM I love the imagery and romantic content, Vijay. I can imagine two people lost in one another...walking on air!! Regards // paul Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/13/2018 4:31:00 PM Enjoyed reading your comments...many thanks Paul.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/13/2018 3:46:00 PM Sweet, romantic and pretty imagery , Vijay. Good luck in this contest. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/13/2018 4:30:00 PM Thank you Andrea...appreciate the kind feedback.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/13/2018 12:23:00 PM - I enjoy reading your beautiful and romantic sonnet, Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/13/2018 3:37:00 PM Appreciate your comments as always, many thanks Anne-Lise.

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/13/2018 12:14:00 PM you warm my heart with this marvelous poem, vijay!..love is in the air!.. huggs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/13/2018 12:19:00 PM Many thanks nette..always appreciate your kind words.

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 5/13/2018 9:25:00 AM Vijay, my friend, this outstanding piece is indeed another manifestation of your extraordinary talent as a premier romantic poet! It exudes the magic of summer love! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/13/2018 12:19:00 PM Thank you Pandita--appreciate your kind feedback my friend.

Roy Pett Date: 5/13/2018 5:24:00 AM Beautifully written sonnet Vijay, emotional and romantic, a joy to read my friend. :)) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/13/2018 7:31:00 AM Always happy to read your kind words--many thanks Roy.

Eve Roper Date: 5/12/2018 9:45:00 PM Nicely done, Vijay, a wonderful romantic and perfect sonnet.. good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/13/2018 7:31:00 AM Thank you Eve..enjoyed reading your feedback.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 5/12/2018 1:23:00 PM A romantic sonnet where the whole nature participates to help reach a climatic conclusion of love ! Marvelously done my friend, Vijay! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/12/2018 3:48:00 PM Glad to read your comments my friend..many thanks.

Winged Warrior Date: 5/12/2018 7:31:00 AM A beautiful sonnet my friend...romantic in every aspect...a win for best...love and light...^WW^ Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/12/2018 3:47:00 PM Appreciate your feedback my friend--thank you WW.

Arturo Michael Date: 5/12/2018 7:31:00 AM Movie scenes... well depicted...lots of love here...I guess, walking on air...All the best Vijay... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/12/2018 3:47:00 PM Appreciate your feedback Arturo..many thanks.

Heidi Sands Date: 5/12/2018 7:08:00 AM A beautiful summer love sonnet. Walk on air! I love it. Good luck in the contest Vijay :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/12/2018 3:46:00 PM Thank you Heidi..happy to read your comments.