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Our love rests within two beating hearts, I love the spirit and grace resting in you, There's nothing shall ever keep us apart, as thirsting grass pines for morning dew. We shall love within each other's touch, with tenderness in each soothing hand. No need to ever say our love, tis' too much, or that any night is not ours to command! I have seen beautiful flowers in your eyes, and great promise in your sensual ways. Your sunshine permeates my longing skies where love and hope grace all our days. You speak of love in words of tenderness, yet tis' great strength you reveal in emotion, that flames my desire in want of your caress. I pledge to you, my heart in fullest devotion. In your eyes I glean that your promise will last, and that our lives be as sweet as fine aged wine. To your side and love, I shall ever cling fast. I am content to know you will forever be mine. Some nights I spend awake, watching you sleep, whispering words of love you can't hear me say. Tis' the gift of you that I shall treasure and keep, nestled safely inside my heart to savor each day. December 12th 2015 A Collaboration with Robert Lindley In appreciation for your lovely words, Robert ~

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Date: 12/15/2015 10:20:00 AM
How beautiful Lin!! Great collaboration! *smiles*-luloo
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Date: 12/15/2015 10:24:00 AM
Thank you, Luloo. Robert is a great collaborator. We wrote it quickly because it just flowed. I hope you visit the same poem on his page, I know he'd love to ready such a nice compliment from you. Hugs
Date: 12/13/2015 12:01:00 PM
Nice... skat
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Date: 12/15/2015 10:23:00 AM
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Date: 12/13/2015 1:24:00 AM
Lin, you have helped write a beautiful special poem.
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Date: 12/13/2015 4:20:00 AM
Thank you, FR...very nice compliment.
Date: 12/12/2015 7:56:00 PM
Dear Lin Lane Bravo to the both of you, what a wonderful collaboration, it flows superbly, great job, a moving work of inspiration, excellence in poetic form and the emotion tugs at the human soul with devotions heights of magnificences, cheri
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Date: 12/13/2015 1:26:00 AM
cheri, your commentary to Lin is poetry to me. you encourage exceptionally well.
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Date: 12/12/2015 8:01:00 PM
Thank you for such glowing compliments, Cherl. I hope you visit Robert's poem as well. I'm sure he'd love to see your kind remarks. Hugs to you.
Date: 12/12/2015 4:23:00 PM
A pleasure to write with such a talented and fine poetic soul my friend. I appreciate your superb verses in this, our collaborative poem. Anytime my friend...
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Date: 12/12/2015 4:34:00 PM
It was an honor to collaborate with you, Robert. Your thoughts were easy to follow, and your verses set the proper mood. Merci beaucoup, sir.
Date: 12/12/2015 4:15:00 PM
such a beautiful romantic collaboration Lin and Robert:-) hugs jan xx 7
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Date: 12/12/2015 4:31:00 PM
Thank you lots, Jan. Robert loves rhyme as I do, so it was a good connection
Date: 12/12/2015 3:43:00 PM
Beautiful collaboration Lin *smiles*
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Date: 12/12/2015 4:01:00 PM
I'm glad you find it beautiful. Thank you, Laura.
Date: 12/12/2015 2:32:00 PM
well done, very nice merging of two poets, it took me a couple or readings to find the difference in style..and I'm still not sure..
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Date: 12/12/2015 2:37:00 PM
Thanks, Frederic. Robert's lines made it easy to write of romance.

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