Lin Lane Poet Romanticism

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We Two, Shall Love As One

Our love rests within two beating hearts, 
I love the spirit and grace resting in you,
There's nothing shall ever keep us apart,
as thirsting grass pines for morning dew. 

We shall love within each other's touch, 
with tenderness in each soothing hand. 
No need to ever say our love, tis' too much, 
or that any night is not ours to command! 

I have seen beautiful flowers in your eyes, 
and great promise in your sensual ways. 
Your sunshine permeates my longing skies 
where love and hope grace all our days. 

You speak of love in words of tenderness,
yet tis' great strength you reveal in emotion,
that flames my desire in want of your caress.
I pledge to you, my heart in fullest devotion.

In your eyes I glean that your promise will last,
and that our lives be as sweet as fine aged wine.
To your side and love, I shall ever cling fast.
I am content to know you will forever be mine.

Some nights I spend awake, watching you sleep,
whispering words of love you can't hear me say.
Tis' the gift of you that I shall treasure and keep,
nestled safely inside my heart to savor each day.


December 12th  2015
A Collaboration with Robert Lindley
In appreciation for your lovely words,  Robert ~

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Beautiful Scars December 15, 2015 at 10:20 AM How beautiful Lin!! Great collaboration! *smiles*-luloo Lin Lane December 15, 2015 at 10:24 AM Thank you, Luloo. Robert is a great collaborator. We wrote it quickly because it just flowed. I hope you visit the same poem on his page, I know he'd love to ready such a nice compliment from you. Hugs

Skat A December 13, 2015 at 12:01 PM Nice... skat Lin Lane December 15, 2015 at 10:23 AM tks

Done Posting December 13, 2015 at 1:24 AM Lin, you have helped write a beautiful special poem. Lin Lane December 13, 2015 at 4:20 AM Thank you, FR...very nice compliment.

Cherl Dunn December 12, 2015 at 7:56 PM Dear Lin Lane Bravo to the both of you, what a wonderful collaboration, it flows superbly, great job, a moving work of inspiration, excellence in poetic form and the emotion tugs at the human soul with devotions heights of magnificences, cheri Done Posting December 13, 2015 at 1:26 AM cheri, your commentary to Lin is poetry to me. you encourage exceptionally well. Lin Lane December 12, 2015 at 8:01 PM Thank you for such glowing compliments, Cherl. I hope you visit Robert's poem as well. I'm sure he'd love to see your kind remarks. Hugs to you.

Robert Lindley December 12, 2015 at 4:23 PM A pleasure to write with such a talented and fine poetic soul my friend. I appreciate your superb verses in this, our collaborative poem. Anytime my friend... Lin Lane December 12, 2015 at 4:34 PM It was an honor to collaborate with you, Robert. Your thoughts were easy to follow, and your verses set the proper mood. Merci beaucoup, sir.

Jan Allison December 12, 2015 at 4:15 PM such a beautiful romantic collaboration Lin and Robert:-) hugs jan xx 7 Lin Lane December 12, 2015 at 4:31 PM Thank you lots, Jan. Robert loves rhyme as I do, so it was a good connection

Beautiful Scars December 12, 2015 at 3:43 PM Beautiful collaboration Lin *smiles* Lin Lane December 12, 2015 at 4:01 PM I'm glad you find it beautiful. Thank you, Laura.

Frederic Parker December 12, 2015 at 2:32 PM well done, very nice merging of two poets, it took me a couple or readings to find the difference in style..and I'm still not sure.. Lin Lane December 12, 2015 at 2:37 PM Thanks, Frederic. Robert's lines made it easy to write of romance.