We Lay In Clover

Inhaling scent of heather and each blossomed spray Surrounding us that warm clear springtime day, We lay in clover, with our eyes on a bouquet - White, wooly blooms - the wild blue yonder’s grand display! Those flower-clouds went softly drifting; by and by They changed into a valentine so very high Above us in the heaven’s perfect azure sky, As if a prelude to romance. . . . to make us sigh! Then like two children savoring a sweet parfait, We stayed deliciously engaged in passion play Until disheveled, and our hair in disarray, We heard above us in a tree, a squawking jay! He seemed to want to split us up; we’d not comply! And even now, I yearn to be where you and I Both pledged a love that man or God could not defy. Alas, we never guessed our spring could ever die! Andrea Dietrich Summer, 2010 For the Contest of Poet ~ Destroyer Spring~ Any poem about SPRING~ (new or old) Poetry Contest
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Date: 2/23/2012 4:00:00 PM
A lovely poem, Andrea. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/22/2012 2:03:00 PM
congrats on another top spot win andrea! love the image of those "flower-clouds", sounds like you had a very romantic springtime, but bittersweet there at the end...
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Date: 2/22/2012 9:46:00 AM
Congrats, Andrea. Outstanding, well written, well deserved win. Enjoyed. Great job. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 2/22/2012 9:11:00 AM
ah yes the beauty of luv and clover and being first place winner again Andrea.. congrats for this dynamo of emotion luv..
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Date: 2/22/2012 9:09:00 AM
Descriptive and beautifully written Andrea. Congrats on a well deserved win! Hugs
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Date: 2/22/2012 7:25:00 AM
another feather on your cap, andie... congrats on your top win! :) huggs!
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Date: 2/22/2012 5:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in ~P.D.'s~ "Spring~tease" contest *Andrea*. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2012 1:10:00 AM
Andrea congratulations this is lovely a well deserved win xx Thansk for all your comments I appreaciate them xx
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Date: 2/21/2012 11:24:00 PM
Andrea, Monorhymes can be very difficult and you made it look easy. A credit to your talent. Congrats on winning PD's contest..........S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/21/2012 10:53:00 PM
ANDREA, thank you... always... congrats... with your entry...I'm that one romantic girl sitting and hunting for clovers.... have a good one..always..pd
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Date: 10/30/2010 5:19:00 PM
reminded me of a time we tried to make love on a mountain top LOL aplane flew by and ruined it cause my ex is shy. I said my goodness how big do you think you arethat you can be seen from an airplane LOL. Thanks love ya Congrad's
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Date: 10/19/2010 5:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
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Date: 10/12/2010 2:42:00 PM
I like the youthful passion that you described here. I think it's the way you always want to feel when you in love with someone. Congratulations on getting a win with this beautiful piece!
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Date: 10/9/2010 2:19:00 PM
beautiful entry in the contest, congrats on your win
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Date: 10/9/2010 7:07:00 AM
Many congratulations Andrea on your win in Constance's contest 'Why oh Why' have a lovely weekend >> James
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Date: 10/8/2010 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. Love,Carol
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Date: 10/8/2010 9:51:00 AM
Andrea congratulations on your win in the contest. I love this write. ;) love Wilma
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Date: 10/8/2010 5:24:00 AM
Congratulations on this well mdeserved win, Andrea
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Date: 10/8/2010 4:01:00 AM
Congratulatons, Andrea, on your placemnt in my contest, Why Oh Why, and in answer to your questions, yes, ths was a very difficult contest to judge ~
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Date: 10/8/2010 3:46:00 AM
This is so beautiful and yet ends sadly..Congrats on your win in Constance's contest..btw to answer your curiosity about my past work..I was a sous chef in resort hotels and private clubs..if the chef wasn't there I was the chef.. I was next in line to the chef..alot of travel from Fla, to New England ..Fla in winter and New England in summer..it was a great life mostly!take care~Deb
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Date: 10/7/2010 11:52:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your win in Constance's contest with this extra special entry my friend.. enjoy another victorious moment this happy weekend with luv..
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Date: 10/7/2010 10:46:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, Andrea, though sad..my congratulations on your 6th Place win in the contest! Thanks for leaving comments on mine. Love, Audrey
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Date: 10/7/2010 10:25:00 PM
I really like this-- such a bittersweet write of yours-- congrats on your win with this :D-- also wanted to say hi--- eep sorry still haven't repleid to your email? I fell asleep last night-- talk to you later :) hugs--nikko :)
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Date: 10/7/2010 9:10:00 PM
Lovely imagery. many congratulationd Andrea.
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Date: 6/13/2010 5:42:00 AM
boy can you "meter it out!" excellent verse! Thanks for your sweet comment on Banshee's Wail....it is a past live experience...Light & Love
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