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We Hardly Knew Ye, Mark

When but three months old we sadly passed you to God's eternal care. His promise of seeing you again one day consoled us in our despair. What might you have become, dear Mark, had fate not dealt you so? A doctor, a minister, a teacher? Alas, that we shall never know. We hardly knew ye, lad. Although you blessed our lives for just a little while, We shall never forget your sweet face and precious smile. Your sisters were so proud to have had a little brother, And you were the apple of our eyes to me and your Mother. We hardly knew ye, son. Although your time with us on earth was all too brief, We were comforted by God and His angels in our grief, Knowing that at the end of life's perilous earthly bourne, We'll hold you once again one glorious and joyous morn! We hardly knew ye, Mark. In memory of our son, Mark Evans Hinshaw, 11 Jan 1968 - 6 Apr 1968 Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 1 in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Elegy" Contest - August 2010

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Date: 8/22/2010 10:31:00 PM
LThe sadness eases but never goes away and there is always that question mark for what he would have been. congratultions on your win but sorry for your loss. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/21/2010 3:49:00 PM
Awesome Bob! beautiful.
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Date: 8/19/2010 8:49:00 PM
Congratulations to you for this truly moving poem taking first place and much deserved. So sorry for your loss. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 8/17/2010 3:25:00 PM
sigh...It so reminded me of On the Road to Sweet Athie/When Johnny comes marching home? I lost one too dear. Powerful winning write!Light & Love
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Date: 8/16/2010 6:08:00 PM
My oh my, Bob...what a heartbreaking beauty this is.... We have much in common, my friend...the old saying 'we are not supposed to outlive our children' is so very true isn't it? A well deserved 1st place win.... Blessings to you sir - Tim
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Date: 8/15/2010 10:37:00 AM
My congratulations to you Robert on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Elegy". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations Robert on your most worthy win in Dr Ram's contest with this beauty. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/14/2010 5:12:00 PM
Congrats, Bob. Great job. Couldn't be happier for you. Have a great weekend. Ralphie
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Date: 8/14/2010 1:05:00 PM
Big congrats Bob on your first place number one win in Dr. Ram's contest.. another brilliant piece of poetry to delight us with ..enjoy my friend.. a well desereved victory..with luv..
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Date: 8/14/2010 7:26:00 AM
Such a tender and heartfelt poem, Robert! Lovely, and sweet and sad....it breaks my heart.. I have a daughter, who was born that same year, and this makes me realize even more, the gift I was given. God Bless. ... Carrie
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Date: 8/14/2010 6:52:00 AM
Big congrats on your first place win, Bob! I'm so sorry for your loss. Am hoping Mallory got the job. This is a beautifully written piece and well deserving of its first-place win. Nothing is more tragic than losing a child so young. God bless you, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/14/2010 6:38:00 AM
Congrats for the first placement in my contest, Bob
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Date: 8/12/2010 9:22:00 AM
Enjoyed reading the Elegy that so honors your son..Let me say that this had to be so difficult on you, your wife, and family. My adoptive parents too lost a daughter in infancy and I always viewed them when from time to time the daughter was discussed...There was always the pain and the fact that they knew that someday they would see her again..This one reads like a winners' circle poem for sure..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I had a little bit better night last night..Sara
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Date: 8/12/2010 7:50:00 AM
so sorry for your loss...It must be hardest of all losses to deal with...
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Date: 8/11/2010 5:09:00 PM
Awesome entry, My friend. A sad memory but a great write. Good luck. Ralph
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Date: 8/11/2010 9:08:00 AM
What wonderful poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I have not read a bad poem yet today. I am enjoying reading each and everyone from old poets and new poets alike. Lots of amazing contest entries also. Thank you for sharing yours with us today Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 2:35:00 PM
Extremely touching Bob and only a parent who has lost a little one can truly understand the pain and sorrow and heartfelt loss ..u have captured it in this piece ..good luck.. in Dr. Ram's contest.. and my poem is about losing my Mother though it can apply to any luv in life.. and when u read it u think of a lost louv.. we go on.. enjoy ..with luv..
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Date: 8/10/2010 1:02:00 PM
Bob now why'd you make me cry? Beautiful write, I can imagine Mark smiling even though he was just a baby he felt the love.. All the best for Dr. Ram's contest, love Wilma
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Date: 8/10/2010 1:01:00 PM
ROBERT,Thanx's U 4 a wOnderful. POem. A nice way tO EXPRESS wOrds * luv~ SKAT
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