We Awoke To Five Machine Guns

we awoke to five machine guns
staring at us
all were American made
therein a comfort
another American in a foreign land
the caveat, Federales were holding them
we were naked
Sally from the Alley and i
wanted to ask us a few questions
i made my way to my pants
promising God, if you would
get me out of this one
i will never touch another drop
the caveat, never promise in haste
as she arose
five machine guns followed her
half-naked across the room
the caveat, opportunity invites celerity
quickly i slipped my grip on the rum
two swallows down
Paul's epistle to Timothy
a little wine for thy stomach's sake
and your frequent ailments
such as my hangovers
on the other bed lay
Tennyson, Kerouac, Yeats, Dickinson
playing deaf and dumb
along with a quarter pound of smoke
i will give you five to one
they take the smoke
and leave the poets alone
the caveat, they did

well gentlemen say i
none spoke English
i will give you five to one
i will get out of this
God pities drunks and idiots
already two get-out-of-jail-free cards
i did after hours of questioning
a refresher course on Mexican law
and the realization come morning
the reason for all of this
i would be burying another friend
because of alcohol
just when you have life figured
it slaps the smile away

   Fergus Falls   96   The Patient Stones

“The road of excess leads to the palace of wisdom...You never know what is enough until you know what is more than enough.”   William Blake, Proverbs of Hell

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Date: 6/19/2022 5:17:00 PM
Wild tale with some wisdom tossed in to guide one through the chaos we call present day life. Those mexican jails are crazy and they may never let you out. You were lucky. Spent twelve years in El Paso, so very familiar with the border life. A poet friend in Texas, Bill p.s. I'll read more later, Timothy or do you prefer Tim? I'm following your poetry now ... welcome to poetry soup.
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Timothy Ray
Date: 7/1/2022 10:22:00 AM
well truth be told i did go to jail, not for this, but one night sharing a bottle of rum with a group of friends who were mariachis....we did go to jail for public noises...the pueblo just did not understand love songs going down the street at 2 AM....hungover and looking out the bars in the late AM we were blessed in that they had not searched us....i had a packet of valium so all we needed was water...like i say Bill, God pities drunks and Idiots...we had 2 get out of jail cards right there...and valiums
Date: 6/17/2022 5:21:00 PM
Love it! Realism, easily envisioned.
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/17/2022 5:29:00 PM
it was a wild time before i became sober and then life changed on me...i miss those days when we worked together on another website...great crowd, many different views on life...Aboutdot com...but it is fun here....takes me away from politics....good to see ya here Annie..funny thing about Mexico, i started picking up the romance novels the tourist left behind and how they had changed
Date: 6/16/2022 6:55:00 AM
this continues my poem "the nights were filled with arguments"
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/17/2022 10:49:00 AM
Hello Timothy Ray, yes when you have life figured out, it slaps you in the face. It does happen. enjoy your day my friend.
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