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We Awoke To Five Machine Guns

we awoke to five machine guns staring at us all were American made therein a comfort another American in a foreign land the caveat, Federales were holding them we were naked Sally from the Alley and i wanted to ask us a few questions i made my way to my pants promising God, if you would get me out of this one i will never touch another drop the caveat, never promise in haste as she arose five machine guns followed her half-naked across the room the caveat, opportunity invites celerity quickly i slipped my grip on the rum two swallows down Paul's epistle to Timothy a little wine for thy stomach's sake and your frequent ailments such as my hangovers on the other bed lay Tennyson, Kerouac, Yeats, Dickinson playing deaf and dumb along with a quarter pound of smoke i will give you five to one they take the smoke and leave the poets alone the caveat, they did well gentlemen say i none spoke English i will give you five to one i will get out of this God pities drunks and idiots already two get-out-of-jail-free cards i did after hours of questioning a refresher course on Mexican law and the realization come morning the reason for all of this i would be burying another friend because of alcohol just when you have life figured it slaps the smile away Fergus Falls 96 The Patient Stones “The road of excess leads to the palace of wisdom...You never know what is enough until you know what is more than enough.” William Blake, Proverbs of Hell

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Date: 6/19/2022 5:17:00 PM
Wild tale with some wisdom tossed in to guide one through the chaos we call present day life. Those mexican jails are crazy and they may never let you out. You were lucky. Spent twelve years in El Paso, so very familiar with the border life. A poet friend in Texas, Bill p.s. I'll read more later, Timothy or do you prefer Tim? I'm following your poetry now ... welcome to poetry soup.
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Timothy Ray
Date: 7/1/2022 10:22:00 AM
well truth be told i did go to jail, not for this, but one night sharing a bottle of rum with a group of friends who were mariachis....we did go to jail for public noises...the pueblo just did not understand love songs going down the street at 2 AM....hungover and looking out the bars in the late AM we were blessed in that they had not searched us....i had a packet of valium so all we needed was water...like i say Bill, God pities drunks and Idiots...we had 2 get out of jail cards right there...and valiums
Date: 6/17/2022 5:21:00 PM
Love it! Realism, easily envisioned.
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/17/2022 5:29:00 PM
it was a wild time before i became sober and then life changed on me...i miss those days when we worked together on another website...great crowd, many different views on life...Aboutdot com...but it is fun here....takes me away from politics....good to see ya here Annie..funny thing about Mexico, i started picking up the romance novels the tourist left behind and how they had changed
Date: 6/16/2022 6:55:00 AM
this continues my poem "the nights were filled with arguments"
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/17/2022 10:49:00 AM
Hello Timothy Ray, yes when you have life figured out, it slaps you in the face. It does happen. enjoy your day my friend.

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