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We are all broken people new song version

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A song inspired by Richard Lamoureaux Broken people poem. One of the top 5 all time poems here on the soup.

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We are all broken people You see the cooler kids, You really don't fit in... Try not to let your frustration show You don't know what to do, When other people look at you... Don't worry there's still time to grow Chorus We are all broken people... trying our best to fit in... We are all broken people... The time will come when we will win, Yes we'll win...yes we'll win The time will come when we will win Sometimes we lose the fight... Standing up for what is right... but we'll be stronger in the end We might feel like a stranger... 'round every corner there is danger... but, by our side we'll have a friend Chorus We are all broken people... trying our best to fit in... We are all broken people... The time will come when we will win, Yes we'll win...yes we'll win The time will come when we will win Sometimes it's just too much... searching, but not finding love... too many fish swim in the sea You probably feel odd... but all of us are flawed... You'll find your mate, just wait and see! Chorus We are all broken people... trying our best to fit in... We are all broken people... The time will come when we will win, Yes, we'll win...yes, we'll win The time will come when we will win repeat chorus Redone with music and vocals John Derek Hamilton July 28,2025

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 7/31/2025 3:13:00 AM

WOW JOHN! You definitely blew my socks off with this one! I felt every word! You definitely got you a hit with this one!! It’s nice to be back thank you! Hope you will be reading some more of my work! :)

John Hamilton
Date: 7/31/2025 9:28:00 PM

Sorry comment jumped places lol fixed it!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/31/2025 7:36:00 AM

John it’s Brenda not Brandy lmao!

John Hamilton
Date: 7/31/2025 5:28:00 AM

Hi Brenda glad you came by today, and I am pleased you liked this one, hopefully it will get heard one way or another. I will definitely check out more of your writing.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/30/2025 5:50:00 PM

Sometimes we lose the fight standing up for what is right, but we'll be stronger in the end. ' Soooo true, my dear friend. Your thoughts touch my heart so deeply. The music you have chosen flows so smoothly with your words. Thanks for sharing. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy

John Hamilton
Date: 7/31/2025 5:26:00 AM

Thanks Brandy I thought you might like it, glad you came by today! John

Bill Baker

Date: 7/30/2025 3:34:00 PM

This will resonate with many, John. Well-written and performed my friend. Keep sharing your gift, John. If nothing else, it sure helps me to hear words of hope and assurance in the times of trials and tribulations. You've been a blessing to my life in this short time I've known you and your music. Write On! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Chris Green

Date: 7/30/2025 1:19:00 PM

John, I think you have a hit on your hands here. This piece is catchy and very relevant to many different situations and I know so many people will find a meaning that suits their need. Really cool my friend.

John Hamilton
Date: 7/30/2025 3:18:00 PM

Thanks Chris I appreciate the feedback, especially from you, your opinion means a lot. Take care.

Wendy Watson

Date: 7/30/2025 1:11:00 PM

John, is this your own voice? What a beautiful gift. You have really done justice to this meaningful poem. It was a pleasure to visit this site again after a long absence and find this wonderful entry. Wendy

John Hamilton
Date: 7/30/2025 1:14:00 PM

Welcome back Wendy, no that's not my voice they are paid musicians and singers but it's professionally recorded. Glad you liked it!