We All Are One

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When any body part is sick, we do not beat it with a stick but treat it, so that it may heal and we do so, with utmost zeal, since it is a part of our form, alive owing to blood flow warm, which like our breath, is but God’s grace, outpouring love, leaving no trace of judgment, for we all are one ~ living light of the central sun. 29-July-2022

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David Kavanagh

Date: 7/29/2022 1:34:00 PM

I could never understand what self-flaeggelation was supposed to achieve, like your opening lines say we should care for ourselves not beat ourselves pointlessly, I believe we are all individual Seeker, but are linked together by the fabric of reality, cheers David

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/29/2022 6:07:00 PM

That’s metaphorical. Just like no part of our body is other than us, no soul is other than the singular God essence or we may say, universal consciousness

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/28/2022 11:48:00 PM

Reminds me of St Paul. Great thought.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/29/2022 6:08:00 PM

Thank you, Victor. I must look up St Paul ~ not familiar with his work