Way Back Then When I Was Ten

Way back then when I was Ten

There were times I recall before
A year had passed to end the War
Block parties ran the streets galore
Depression weaned  and life was fine
No rationed food and free to dine
Spinster teachers taught us well
To learn life’s lessons and excel
Coal was used to heat our home
And collected as the week would pass
We stayed close and never roamed
Our world enclosed by one small street
There were not many folks to meet 
A shy and awkward child was I
Difficult to blend in well
But only time would break the spell
Then one day I began to pry
In reading books and seek the lore
Of travel and its scenes galore

I accomplished all the dreams I sought
On lessons learned and what it brought
And recall the times I lived as a child
Fight life when it’s fierce embrace it when mild
But I’ll never forget to to remember when
Way back then when I was ten
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Delaney Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 11:19 PM
Congratulations Ralph: Our childhood shapes us so much, and we often look back with nostalgia. Best, SuZ
Gentry Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 10:51 AM
Congratulations on your win! I enjoyed your trip back in time. Well done.
A   Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 9:20 AM
Ralph, Congratulations on your nice win. LINDA
Onclaud Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 7:34 AM
charming verse at 10, ralph.. best of congrats!..huggs
Lane Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 5:37 AM
Those childhood memories are worth holding on to. Congratulations, Ralph.
Turner Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 9:38 PM
A wonderful story, Ralph. I'd be lovin some of those spinster teachers about now. LOL. Thanks for giving us a glimpse into your life and congratulations.
Sergi Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 7:17 AM
THANK YOU, DANIEL FOR YOUR COMMENT.
Deschler Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 8:14 PM
Some truly wonderful memories you've shared and I enjoyed reading them, Ralph... Congrats on a win with this beautiful poem! Nicely written and rhymed! Thanks for entering, Ralph :)
Sergi Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 7:05 AM
Thank you , Kelly for your comment , much appreciated.
Makama Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 8:51 AM
A wonder and a bliss, your lines have given my heart a kiss and I am glad on your page, I did not suffer a miss. An outright 7 dear colleague
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 11:05 PM
This is a wonderful poem Ralph. Sounds like you have had some exciting times.
Sergi Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 2:46 PM
Hi Connie: I will always recall my days in South Philly.
Lindley Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 8:43 PM
I really like this one . When I was ten we lived on a farm, were poor and had very tough times but looking back now we had each other 11 children and we although quite poor had fun and lived happy. Great poem... A7
Allison Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 7:00 PM
wonderful memories in your rhyme good luck in the contest Ralph:-) hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 6:15 AM
Soup is pretty quiet at times Ralph I try and comment as widely as a can but some days I have little time to even write poems:-) hugs Jan xx
Sergi Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 10:19 PM
Hi Jan: Thanks for being the first to comment as always.
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