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Isn't it obvious? Too much is Yet second guessing isn't welcomed Nor is finishing sente... there must be some sweet spot between connection and surprise there is and it's delicious/scrub that b l i s s

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 1/14/2024 4:31:00 PM

Second guessing isn't needed if its obvious you are so right D and yes right again "the sweet spot" certainly is BLISS. Squash it up a tad to 6 lines and it will make a brilliant entry for Line's mini Contest. :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/15/2024 11:52:00 AM

Think I entered something else for that one but I've long since forgotten what. My formed obviously poems do better in that one (oh it was the mossy roof one). It's great chatting without purpose, I love it!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/14/2024 11:11:00 AM

I liked your almost poem. Is this forgetfulness, or procrastination? I also like the way, oh, forgot what it was.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/15/2024 11:50:00 AM

This is a thought forming, the unnecessary bits falling away but the essence remaining :) it's also what it feels like to chat to friends about nothing much but spend a couple of hours doing so. Thanks for stopping by :)

Gary Radice

Date: 1/14/2024 3:52:00 AM

DD, I've decided that your poems could hang in The Tate just as they are and not be out of place. They are works of abstract art. Cheers - Gary

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/15/2024 11:49:00 AM

Ahh yes, or maybe Pompidou :) I really should collaborate with someone who bends 50 foot lengths of wire :D Thank you for sharing this thought, it was delightful. I'll probably mention it to the staff next time I'm there :)