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("Waters of Eternity," Image courtesy of devianart.com)

I run my fingers through the waters of eternity sometimes catching a poem

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Date: 3/11/2024 6:33:00 PM
Catchy title and poem for us, Sara. Thought-provoking poetry. Bill
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Date: 3/6/2024 3:19:00 PM
Another inspired poem Sara...a lovely image and one that lodges in the readers mind...you are a master at leaving such gems.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/7/2024 4:48:00 AM
thank you kindly, Paul. Grateful for your visits and comments. I look forward to reading them. Appreciate our poetic connection. Have a great day, Sara
Date: 3/6/2024 12:53:00 PM
Thats so sweet Sara! Debx
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/7/2024 4:47:00 AM
thank you, Deb. Have a great Thursday, Sara
Date: 3/6/2024 11:13:00 AM
I am truly awestruck by the profound experience of immersing one's fingers into the boundless expanse of eternity, occasionally grasping a poetic masterpiece. Your muse is undeniably radiant, my friend. It must be Ozoth: (Smile)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/6/2024 5:40:00 PM
thank you, dearest Sotto for your enthusiastic and supportive words. I agree, my muse has been radiant of late. I think she may have been napping some during the winter months. I agree, must be Azoth....made me smile...thank you. Have a wonderful evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 3/6/2024 8:58:00 AM
Wow thats a beautiful picture and also how creative is this saraku. I think many can resonate, ah the softness of your voice emanates through your well crafted poem, which is so creative and soulfully moving, i love “ i run my fingers” wow! And also the ending! Be it short or long im always impressed by your poems. Need to read more of yours. Sending you light always
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/6/2024 5:37:00 PM
you're most kind, dearest Ink! I'm grateful your found my saraku creative. Thanks for your words about the softness of my voice...those mean a lot to me. I appreciate you, my poet friend and kindred spirit! Sending you hugs and lovely thoughts, Sara
Date: 3/5/2024 6:40:00 PM
I rarely fave a poem, but I did this one. Thank you for sharing
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/6/2024 5:35:00 PM
wow, thank you Chetta. I'm humbly grateful for the fave. Glad you liked the poem; I appreciate your visit. Have a wonderful evening, Sara
Date: 3/5/2024 6:19:00 PM
Oh good gosh this may be the best mono ever. I never thought I'd fave a monoku but this is just so perfect for what we do here. Btw, re photo, did you mean Deviantart? Some awesome artists there
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/6/2024 5:34:00 PM
wow, thank you, Tom, for those enthusiastic comments!! I'm humbly grateful for your words and the fav! Yes, I meant devianart...I need to correct that...have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 3/5/2024 5:37:00 PM
A poem's inception is always a mystery. Where do they come from? This poem is superb. You have a creative mind.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/6/2024 5:33:00 PM
thank you, Hilda. I agree...I wonder about the mystery surrounding a poem's inception. Thanks for your visit and kind words....I found them meaningful. Have a great evening, hugs, Sara

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