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Water's Fury

Rain swirls and turns in every ditch... Death flows at torrential speeds.

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/13/2010 4:04:00 AM

Congratulations Doris, on placing in the “Anything Goes!” contest sponsored by: Deborah Guzzi with this insightful...image provoking poem. Enjoy your glory! Smiles, Dane Ann

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/12/2010 8:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this one..Mom

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/9/2010 11:29:00 AM

Congratulations Doris on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Anything Goes" Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 7/8/2010 5:56:00 AM

Powerful image. Congratulations on your win, Doris. Love, Laiie

Timothy Brumley

Date: 7/8/2010 5:37:00 AM

Congrats on your win in Deborah's contest Doris!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/7/2010 7:11:00 PM

Congrats Doris on your big win in the Anything Goes contest .. enjoy .. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/20/2010 10:38:00 AM

Very thought-provoking, Doris. Can't help but think of all those whose lives have been lost when hurricanes pound coastal states with torrential rains. Great title, too! Love, Carolyn

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/9/2010 11:07:00 PM

Great Imagism, horrific picture! Well- written picturesque! Good job, Doris! Peace and love, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2010 1:23:00 PM

love this imagism, DOris. a great metapho for deathr! LUv, Andrea

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/9/2010 4:17:00 AM

well done Doris! -Robert

John Freeman

Date: 2/8/2010 10:50:00 PM

That it does Doris, every time we let our minds dominate our lives. Great Imagism. Sincerely, love, Moses

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/8/2010 6:22:00 PM

Wow, I like this. You somehow make death sound..beautiful. in the way you write your peom here.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/8/2010 4:47:00 PM

Great entry for the Spaces contest if so... like the title ..it was my Mom's favorite color... yes, Rapport' is a repost as I had deleted all my poems two weeks ago when I intended to leave Soup... but because so many poets wanted me to stay .. I now have to begin posting all over again.. but the good thing ...it gave me a chance to write sooooo many new ones.. thanxxx for asking Doris and for your nice comments too.. luv.. Linda-Marie

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/8/2010 4:33:00 PM

I love your title Doris and your poem gives way to astounding imagery. Thank you for suggesting which form to put my Desire poem in. . . I took your suggestion and put it under Light poetry. Mahalo, Connie

Abe Lopez

Date: 2/8/2010 3:59:00 PM

this is a great image on natures fury....... much love to ya! Doris.

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 2/8/2010 3:12:00 PM

There is a lot said in those few words Thanks so much Daniel

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/8/2010 1:52:00 PM

Great idea that I could go all kinds of ways to fill in the blank. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on all my new work. Mom