Waterfall In Spring

Tumbling cold and clear Into winter's murky pond Preparing the way

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Skat A

Date: 3/10/2010 11:14:00 AM

A wonderful read this morning...Enjoyed

Daver Austin

Date: 3/9/2010 10:07:00 AM

Nice image and fancy. Somewhere up there the snow is melting, thank heaven. I don't have a book out yet, Barb. Am editing two novels, especially punctuation, which I am not too hot at. One is a book about lost Stradivari instruments, the other about paranormal happenings. The Strad book is finished (I think?) a treasure hunt. Now I have to find an agent. LOve, daver

Colleen Bono

Date: 3/9/2010 8:44:00 AM

Short and to the point.Very nice.You have soup mail.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/8/2010 3:42:00 PM

enjoyed today

Date: 3/8/2010 1:21:00 PM

Wonderful message. Nice use of imagery. Good job with this one. Karen

Jared Pickett

Date: 3/8/2010 9:44:00 AM

Hey Barbara!! I love your senryu, one of my favs.....:JP]