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Our tale began four days ago ---- large quantities of H20 Were heated by warm solar rays to start evaporation’s phase Three days ago each molecule forms condensation as clouds cool Two days ago the swollen cloud precipitates with thunder loud What yesterday was melting snow has grown from trickle into flow Today the liquid voices call mere inches from the waterfall… hhh hhh eee eee eee eee eee eee lllllll lllllll lllllll lllllll pppp pppp pppp !!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!! @!@!@@!!@@ @@!@@!@@!@@@ @@@@!@@!@@@@@ @@@@@@!@@!@@@@ @@@@@@@!@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@ @@@@

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Date: 2/18/2020 3:07:00 PM
What a lovely waterfall . Here is a link to your poem , I hope you like it. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vmgJWrMuKpk
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John Watt
Date: 2/18/2020 9:53:00 PM
Thank you for your supportive encouragement and for the link! ~ John
Date: 2/17/2020 12:35:00 PM
This was fantastic. I loved the use of words, painted like a brush... and used to fill my imagination with bright bubbles. Ann
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Date: 2/17/2020 1:05:00 PM
A very nice thing to say Ann. Thank you for the kind thoughts, they are always appreciated ~ John
Date: 2/17/2020 4:23:00 AM
Great. Falling waters and the shape of things to come. Kind wishes, Kai
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John Watt
Date: 2/17/2020 11:38:00 AM
Kai, thanks for visiting my waterfall and leaving behind footprints of your kind words. ~ John
Date: 2/16/2020 11:17:00 PM
:) I am smiling. I love everything about the waters touch. Just recently I created a Sonnet using the words "Waterfall Wishes" in the mixture of the poem. One day I will post it. You have created a masterpiece here my dear friend. :) Let the melody surround you. :) Brandy
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John Watt
Date: 2/16/2020 11:56:00 PM
Brandy, you have really "wetted" my appetite for your sonnet about waterfalls! I will look forward to reading it, my friend. Your kind words are always appreciated ~ John
Date: 2/16/2020 6:29:00 PM
This little gem is a work of art John! This is a keeper! xxoo
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John Watt
Date: 2/16/2020 11:55:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Connie. Always appreciate hearing from you! Aloha ~ John
Date: 2/16/2020 2:44:00 PM
Hello John Watt you have done this poem very Have a nicewell in the shape of a waterfall.Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/17/2020 2:17:00 PM
Hello John Watt i do like the shape of your waterfall poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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John Watt
Date: 2/16/2020 11:53:00 PM
Hi Darlene, I'm glad you like the shape of my waterfall. You have a nice day yourself! John
Date: 2/16/2020 2:27:00 PM
very very clever, John!! Love this.
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John Watt
Date: 2/16/2020 11:53:00 PM
very very much appreciated, Andrea!
Date: 2/16/2020 12:20:00 PM
- Well written, John ... and inventive shape on the waterfall :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Watt
Date: 2/16/2020 11:52:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thanks for the nice comment about the waterfall shape. I struggled with posting it; not everybody shares my interest in creating visual shapes with words. Your words are appreciated. Hugs ~ John
Date: 2/16/2020 9:40:00 AM
Such an original poem, John. Well done.
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John Watt
Date: 2/16/2020 11:51:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Line. Always appreciated.